Roran14 - Profile

As much as I liked the initial premise of the story, the way that the author seemed to put exponentially less effort into writing complete words chapter by chapter, I felt forced to give up reading by chapter 15 . I have read other works by this author as well and I was not disappointed with those at all, however this one is no good from a literate reader perspective .

greatly enjoyed reading this to completion. Seemed a little rushed to the end, but curious to see if the author will continue like he said

I'm truly enjoying the novel so far! The only qualms I have is 1: strange arcs kinda just thrown in at random. 2: a few chapters are duplicated/in the wrong order 3: the most recent 35 chapters are all privilege (the most I've ever seen on any novel was 20 before this). I feel like if these are resolved/edited the story would flow smoother and be more enjoyable than it already is!