Locke039

1mth

Posted

The only complaint is that there are not enough chapters. The story is amazing and I’m sad there is only one chapter a day. Favorite novel right now!!!

Devouring Monarch: Rebirth of the Profane Phoenix

Fantasy · TheDragonSlayer

Locke039

1mth

Posted

Enjoying the novel so far, but I feel like the author’s note and the “dear readers” part at the end of every chapter is just to fill the character limit for the chapter. Paragraphs will also repeat. If I spend coins on your novel, please don’t make me feel like I am getting cheated out of coins/ story. Thanks.

Strongest Dad In The Apocalypse

Fantasy · Aurora_Drakon

Locke039

8mth

Replied to Locke039

Sorry for the grammar error. It should be “lack”, instead of “like”.

ch 115 Chapter114-Mia's Body and Mind（1st update, Cheer me with Power Stones!）

Dungeon King: My Goblins Have Captured Countless Female Players

Fantasy · Red_Skin_Duck

Locke039

9mth

Commented

Just a suggestion, but Ethan shouldn’t be asking every female if it feels good. He doesn’t like confidence, so he shouldn’t have to be validated by asking that and it shows he doesn’t have any confidence in bed. Last suggestion, but the pet names seem like something he wouldn’t say or at least make them better than generic ones. Maybe saying, “my dragoness” instead of baby. Anyway, your story and you don’t need me to tell you how you write. Just keep writing chapters and I will be happy. lol

ch 115 Chapter114-Mia's Body and Mind（1st update, Cheer me with Power Stones!）

Dungeon King: My Goblins Have Captured Countless Female Players

Fantasy · Red_Skin_Duck

Locke039

9mth

Commented

I was interested in this novel until it mentioned floors that will have advanced technology. I prefer it to be one setting or the other. Good luck though author. I enjoyed it till here.

ch 20 System finally completely unlocks!