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This story always gives me conflicting feelings. His Fey journey is really interesting, but I couldn't give two sh* ts about the whole Targaryen nonsense. The Chat Room is also pretty much inconsequential, serving more as a convoluted way to travel dimensions then anything else :/ I feel like it would have been much better had you picked more interesting characters for the chat room and have them act as major side characters, rather than the Targaryen clown car
ch 52 Blade of Miquela
ASOIAF: Dimensional Chat Group
Anime & Comics · Servant_Ambrosius
that lightsaber not melting through the floor tho
ch 72 A Great General
Fate/Fisted
Anime & Comics · Bleap
Amaterasu surviving feels kind of cheap, ngl
ch 115 (Hidden Title)
DxD: ReKiba
Anime & Comics · Alcoholic_Panda
Just wait until right before the Earth goes poof and when they're only alive because Feng ferried them over to the Greater World
"Uh, I have no idea how I'm going to explain this to my parents and the rest of my family." With her family's standing and her being a rich princess, there was no way they'd allow their heir to share a man with other women.
Reincarnation of the strongest sword god-reincarnating once more
Others · DunnoDK
Clone thing feels very convoluted. Imo just having two bodies under his control would have been more interesting. could have served as a grindstone for his mental strength as well
ch 61 Incredible Treasures
Reincarnation of the strongest sword god-reincarnating once more
Others · DunnoDK
It still feels like a very stupid temporary nerf to inject artificial tension into the story that will never not feel forced
Thankfully, his current attributes were worlds beyond the current players, so there was no threat of them being able to even scratch him despite him only having 20% of his usual attributes; with his Strength and Agility still being in the thousands.
Reincarnation of the strongest sword god-reincarnating once more
Others · DunnoDK
While in line with canon, it is still a very annoying mindset to keep reading about. It makes the s*x scenes fall somewhat flat when he suddenly becomes 'dominant' when in everything else relationship related he is an impassive, cowardly beta
Thus, after much deliberation, Feng opted to leave it for later to be dealt with and focus on the things he needed to do for now.
Reincarnation of the strongest sword god-reincarnating once more
Others · DunnoDK
Even if she isn't at the workshop, the top echelon of the guild is and can reach him in real life.
"I was doing doin a quest inside a place with no system connection." Feng briefly explained "Has something happened?"
Reincarnation of the strongest sword god-reincarnating once more
Others · DunnoDK
When's Gentle Snow going to get her memories back ? :/
ch 80 How Angels Sing R-18
Reincarnation of the strongest sword god-reincarnating once more
Others · DunnoDK
thanks! its's been a year or two since I read the original, so I'm definitely going to have issues if you don't lol
ch 0 4 Sherlock and Black Market Challenge
Reincarnation of the strongest sword god-reincarnating once more
Others · DunnoDK
huh I always thought of chloe too
"Guild Leader *cough*, just leave me behind. Save yourself." The red haired woman with an alluring figure in his arms tried to convince the young man, as she coughed up blood.
Reincarnation of the strongest sword god-reincarnating once more
Others · DunnoDK
the monologuing to tell their opponents how they won is a bit meh. I'd personally prefer you just write out for us readers what they're doing in the moment, rather than going "ah, but actually...!" all the time
ch 112 Veldora and Gasper Fights
DxD: ReKiba
Anime & Comics · Alcoholic_Panda
a magic circle is a magic circle... runes, squiggles, geometric shapes... don't think there's anything novel about what she sees
... It was unlike those that were used in the redhead's world- in fact, it was completely different from what the devils in her world used
Honkai impact: Dimensional Herrscher
Anime & Comics · AdamFlores
Kinda weird to not just stick to one system of classification
I planned to stay in the outer layer of the Sunset Monster Mountain Range as it was inhabited only mostly by Minion Monsters which are the same as Low-Class, Warrior Monsters, same as Middle-Class, and Commander Monster same as High-Class.
The Holy Chronicles of Baator
Anime & Comics · Trafford
honestly I prefer the more detailed approach your other DxD fics took. Such a long timeskip, while adding a bunch of characters with only a few lines... eh. Still, with how often you've rewritten your old ones, I can get how having to focus on the same arcs again and again can be annoying beyond belief lol. Also, will the focus of this fic lie more on multiversal exploration than the others? Sure near the end they all started ranging out, but you keep running out of steam not long after. Perhaps by speeding through DxD we'll get more of that?
ch 77 8 Years Later.
The Knight of Ruin(DxD)
Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234
thought you were going to have him just be a demon? You really can't pretend he isn't a good deal werewolf by now :p
He still wore the Cocytus Earing, which was now a much darker purple shade than before. He also had a few new features that he did not have before on his head: a pair of large black Werewolf ears with dark purple tips. Behind him were nine black werewolf tails with purple tips swaying lazily.
The Knight of Ruin(DxD)
Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234
I liked the potential she had in that story, but tbh she didn't have all that much screentime.
(In my first fanfic, my main character, Kurayami(Lightning and Fire Given Form), received Walburga as a gift from his grandfather-in-law, Azrael. She became his crazy maid, and I still like her from then, so she is returning.)
The Knight of Ruin(DxD)
Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234
Them anti-bodies be lazing around mate
(I think I caught Covid again. I feel like absolute shit.)
The Knight of Ruin(DxD)
Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234