Webnovel Author: TooSexy4U - Fanfic Collection

2yr

Replied to God_Of_Hate

Good for you. I dont personally like It but can see why people would. 👍

Gojo suddenly gained a massive tick mark on his head. "Worthy of being a servant to a spoiled, rotten tomato?" Gojo crossed his fingers and took of his sunglasses "Domain Expansion: Infinite Void" The ORC members suddenly appeared in the dark expanse of space with a black hole in the centre. None of them could move, "It's funny isn't it? When you are given everything you can only do nothing. In here every action needed to live is repeated an infinite amount of times."

Gojo in the Multiverse

Anime & Comics · Dawei

TooSexy4U

2yr

Commented

Ahh yes never a DxD story without Rias bashing 😒

Gojo suddenly gained a massive tick mark on his head. "Worthy of being a servant to a spoiled, rotten tomato?" Gojo crossed his fingers and took of his sunglasses "Domain Expansion: Infinite Void" The ORC members suddenly appeared in the dark expanse of space with a black hole in the centre. None of them could move, "It's funny isn't it? When you are given everything you can only do nothing. In here every action needed to live is repeated an infinite amount of times."

Gojo in the Multiverse

Anime & Comics · Dawei

TooSexy4U

2yr

Posted

The sentences Is readable, but the grammar is not superb. I don't know what you expected its fan fiction there's no editors or nothing so i don't really mind the bad grammar. What I do mind however is making the characters OOC to meeting specific agendas for the author. No. The author made relationships with other characters feel forced. This basically follows canon so the world background isn't something to write home about. Anyways good luck writing author, but this wasn’t for me.

Protagonist Killer

Anime & Comics · Dereck_Oliveira

TooSexy4U

3yr

Replied to Fweeee_eeee

bro.BROOOOOOOOO. I normally dont respond to comments but you have the exact same opinions as me. Authors are so terrible at romance its actually laughable. If even the ones that do have romance ts still bad coz it's way instant they get in a relationship with no character development at all.