Neatio - Profile

The entire story so far is a great tale. Everything from the initial shock coming from both the MC and the reader as they learn about a mystic, new world, to the humble beginnings of the protagonists. However, the best part, for me, is the dialogue. A lot of the time it's a vibrant show of emotions that few tend to focus on. It's refreshing, to say the least. Continue the good work sir!

Three hours, a scenario we often don't recognize we're in, but we often are in each day. It seems to be such a simple concept, yet can range for so many things. This story brings it perfectly, making your heart twist and turn as the weight of what has happened becomes fully known through the decisive and incredibly descriptive tale of this poor man. Overall, a highly recommended read.

The use of a quote to perfectly describe how the Main Character feels is certainly a bit new for me to say, but an excellent way to introduce the story. In addition, the way the author followed that up with the direct feelings of the MC, and the way it was described, continued to give me the chills(in a good way) all through the end of the chapter. And the struggles that are told, feel in some way or another, incredibly touching and has a sense of realism that humanizes even the coldest of people. Overall, an excellent read!

It's rare to find a book that grounds itself within the realms of the real world. And it's even rarer(in my opinion), to find ones that manage to the point where it's fresh and exciting. However, as you can guess, this daunting task was completed with full colors by the author of this novel. The action and the description in between every punch and slash hold you in like a fish to bait. Few books, both physical and online, have gotten me genuinely wanting to turn the next chapter full of excitement. Congrats sir, you have done a spectacular job with your story!

No need to thank me when it's well earned.

Thank you kind sir for your advice and overall kind words! 😁

I love the personal feel of this story. Its not often you find someone so conflicted, to the point where it can carry the story. But the writer in this instance does it, and does it well. That, combined with the very few mistakes that may be found makes this an excellent overall great read. All i can say up to this point is to keep it up!

This a very good read, with the author's ability to set the tone and feel for the story clear and precise. The way the words seemingly jump right into your face and tug you into the moment is a very nice touch. Another one for the library!

I'm amazed by how even the first paragraph entices you to read. The author and his way of setting up the scene within the moment is truly something to behold. The is indefinitely add to my library!

With the vivid description that's combined with the world premise established in the prologue, you can't help but anticipate and wonder how the story will branch towards said Prologue from the first chapter. And so far, it does not disappoint!