Esdeath is a good antagonist.Curious to see how it works out.
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Anime & Comics · Support_Five
go with slice of life. show family interactions more. try and involve more in story and change original plot. make it more funny if u can.
Any ideas for what I can do with this fic?
TV · HiTherefic
try making mc work for anything. eg show mc practice for b-ball or show mc researching with tech stuff.and please dont make harem
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thats the thing u can only go for better armor or more power. the character never grows. sure he might suffer some setbacks but he will always suceed. he is already this strong when starting out and will progressively get stronger till there is noone left to defeat.
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i like the story but i think mc is getting over powered. like it is not even 20 chapters in and mc is already more powerful than regular spiderman. i really dont see how mc would grow more. i think the super adaptability and genius intellect is way too overpowered cause he would instantly find weakness of villain or adapt to their powers.and the loving sports thing was not explored in early chapters it just comes up and mc is already good at it.personally i dont like mc having a harem but it is not a harem so i like the story but u introduced all the hot girls so i am confused. u write like u want a harem.
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i would actually like to see governments taking solid steps to combat supers. for example employing supers like mha. just dont want government to be passive while heros and villains fight. also us military in marvel and dc has pretty good characters like amanda waller, general ross. u could use them and make the story more complex.
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Anime & Comics · SlyOW
include more gadgets
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Movies · HuntingFate
no harem pls
No Harem
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Anime & Comics · Dr_Armstrong