The story while interesting seems kinda bland with the way it is written. The story feels more like a basic outline of the general story rather a new retelling with a new character in the mix. There are barely any conversations and those that happen feel useless. This is stand chapter 16.
Anime & Comics · absurdmorbidity
i don't know if it is only for the first few chapters but I think if you translate something you also have to adapt the structure of the sentences. Because overall they seem kinda like a mess which makes it difficult to read.
Anime & Comics · DarkShadow95
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The story while interesting seems kinda bland with the way it is written. The story feels more like a basic outline of the general story rather a new retelling with a new character in the mix. There are barely any conversations and those that happen feel useless. This is stand chapter 16.
Playing One Piece
Anime & Comics · absurdmorbidity