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that had* sworn or swore*
Waking up to an unfamiliar environment, Leon had cried out at the last scene of his father being murdered by the very hands of the people that sworn to serve and protect them.
Prime Originator
Fantasy · Pointbreak
that the four of them together* only the second together should be there.
Asiva, Max , Anna , Sebastian spawned together alongside some people who they had defeated in the tournament and while everyone else hated Asiva and wanted a piece of her for being the champion, they knew that together the four of them together were a formidable fighting force and it was not worth entering into an open fight at the risk of dying at the very start.
MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Vampire God
Games · Raj_Shah_7152
Only fools resorted to showing off whereas the smart ruled from the shadows.
MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Vampire God
Games · Raj_Shah_7152
"First time?" asked Mark, seeing the ugly face of one of the researchers.
Reverend Apocalypse
Fantasy · kommers
one thing that bothers me with a lot of novels, is the over use, or even wrong use, of the exclamation mark.
“I know now! Thanks!” Leylin was not too interested in the affairs of this girl.
Warlock of the Magus World
Fantasy · The Plagiarist
"Just one* more round, and* or then*(both work) we'll head back!"
“Just once more round, we’ll head back!” Leylin said. “After this round, I’ll return this cross blade to you!”
Warlock of the Magus World
Fantasy · The Plagiarist
I swear if he ends up being with that idiot girl who killed him, ima drop it immediately. doesn't matter how good the story is.
"This is Mine, the planet the two of you will be reincarnating. It's a beautiful and lush planet brimming with life. It's size is only a little bigger than Earth and it also has humans like that of Earth's in it, but it also has something Earth doesn't.
Farmer: The first
Fantasy · SilentTreatment
here they* were again** drop the them.its a shame with these constant grammatical mistakes, its slowly ruining the novel for me.
Mack almost forgot about those voices when he woke up, but here were them again, and those voices were only in his mind.
The Last Warlock
Fantasy · kommers
not only did* it* have*
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The Last Warlock
Fantasy · kommers
or Naan bread
Most people when they think about a desert, the first thing that comes to mind is the Sahara desert, but in reality, the Atacama Desert is the driest nonpolar desert in the world, in other words, the most lethal.
The Last Warlock
Fantasy · kommers
I'm curious about the interaction with reflect, if he gets damage resistance does it reflect less. or is the damage reflected based off the other parties damage without reductions in mind 🤔🤔
Option 1: Thick Skin- User has an aptitude for taking damage with a grain of salt. Grants 1% extra physical resistance.
Redo: Grimoire System in the Apocalypse
Fantasy · Ullyr
well even the slides dropped them auto. and I refuse to believe those slimes are smarter than goblins. this seems a little odd
:Goblins are stupid creatures, they don't get a Grimoire until Level 10, even then, its intelligence is typically flawed:
Redo: Grimoire System in the Apocalypse
Fantasy · Ullyr
for being the first to** clear a team dungeon solo.
"Congratulations User, for being the first clear a Team Dungeon solo. Please select a reward."
Redo: Grimoire System in the Apocalypse
Fantasy · Ullyr
still not sure how I feel about no points into str or a couple into agility. nothing good comes from a slow and weak tank
He upped his Defense to 35 and Wisdom to 31. 'Albus, would there be much of a change if I used SP on inspection?'
Redo: Grimoire System in the Apocalypse
Fantasy · Ullyr
kind if reminds me of some demons or creatures, where knowing their true name helps seal them and such.
'That's... going to be a bit difficult to get used to. Maybe not for the children, but most adults will have issues with it.' He quickly relayed this information over to Michelle, and both of them agreed that they would forsake their given names and go by their alias names from then on.
Redo: Grimoire System in the Apocalypse
Fantasy · Ullyr
"I don't know who or what to thank, but thank you for providing this early grinding farm!"
Redo: Grimoire System in the Apocalypse
Fantasy · Ullyr
a personal opinion of mine, and a reason why I won't have kids myself, is I don't feel like it's irresponsible to have kids when you aren't comfortable money wise. having parents that worked hard, and we just made ends meat, id never wants kids to go through that, nor myself again. I'm fine living somewhat comfortably myself.
He looked down at his four-year-old daughter, who had fallen asleep in his lap. Taylor ran his hand through her hair, smiling. There was nothing he wouldn't do for his three children, and he knew that he was cutting it close to the wire.
Redo: Grimoire System in the Apocalypse
Fantasy · Ullyr
drop the were making and just add made* it'll flow better.
Even years later, those memories with his grandfather were making this day a little more special than it already was.
Bound to Evil
Urban · Barbare