Quick fix "fell" instead of "fells"
He pushed the wooden fence door that would always sway back and forth every time it was touched. Ezio shook his head and noted to himself that he should fix it before it completely fells. The wooden door of their simple abode creaked open with his push. The sound was loud enough to wake anyone who was in a deep sleep, luckily, they don't have any neighbors so it was alright.
Fantasy · bluerabyss
instead of "nothing but flimsy" I'm sure you meant to say "anything but flimsy"
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Fantasy · bluerabyss
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 Albino Boy
Fantasy · Rin_Nurnia
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 Albino Boy
Fantasy · Rin_Nurnia
Just wondering if this was intentional but Lazear is similar to Lapis lazuli in name at least it was for me. If it was intentional then I think it's cool that the families may have multiple meaning even if it's only similar colors.
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Hello.. me.. again... just a quick fix on spelling "curious" instead of "curios"
"Mr. Jagan, I advise that you should not get to curios about me especially about my master. We came here to have a normal and quiet life as per my master's preference so if you could hear this request then I will compensate you generously." He pointed at the cookies on the table and then beamed at him.
Your Not So Ordinary Villain
Fantasy · bluerabyss