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Loved the story. It was a wild ride but I came away satisfied.

This book is a solid read at the start. Great amount of story and background that makes the world seem believable, and adds so many fun and exciting characters that help pace a great plot. The last 10 or so chapters seem to set up a even greater threat, then it just ends. Leaves multiple story threads unfinished and leaves no conclusion to this new threat that is coming. Loved the story right up until the very abrupt and disappointing end.

From the start the plot was great. Characters were very well developed. Enjoyed the trials and rise to power over a well organized and thought out system. MC had means to get around the system but not in too crazy a way. A believable way to rise above the convention laid out by the rules of the world. Author does a good job setting and resolving the conflicts that push the story forward. About halfway through the story there is a shift, changed the MC rising from overcoming hardships to a very simple solution. It just seems to lose a lot of the intensity from the earlier chapters. Even though the development of the story seems to really lack near the end I enjoyed the characters enough to read all the way to the end. Author wrote a good story and I recommend the read. I believe that future works from this will only improve. Thanks for the journey into a glorious land, city, void zone, latitude cosmos, void sea, and a perfected illusionary world!