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i only wish the chapters were longer. Other than the chapters feeling too short, i'm enjoying this novel alot.

i like how long the chapters are, and how much detail is put into each scene. As im laying here smoking and reading this i feel like im actually experiencing the story from my own point of view and im watching the scene as im reading it and i get so lost in the words i forget im reading until the chapter ends and reminds me that i am reading. i wish the chapters would go on for an entire day (from the time the protagonist wakes up, to the time they go to sleep). i would like yo write a story like this but with an incredibly high amount of detail to make the readers forget they are reading and just get lost in the world as their own protagonist. Please keep up this excellent writing format in future chapters.