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i believe its one of the best stories in this site the story is pretty good and it gives you the impression that it will continue in this quality

the translation is a joke there are many times that a chapter is split in 2 or should be in previous chapter or the next thus becoming confusing for the reader the translation seems to be from mtl or someone that doesnt know english or chinese(and thats why its very bad) as for the story it is a good one with many points for know being unclear the mc hides hes power and tells hes disciples to do the same(even when the character becomes the stronger in his world) but it has good characters an if it goes well it will be a good novel(its also possible to become a very bad one)