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Hello, dear readers! Author Greed here. This is my newest work, ‘The Coming of Avarice!’. It’ll be updated 3+ times a week. This book is extremely dark, its not R-18 for no reason! So please, enjoy Jake Astaril’s journey in the world of magic! (Also make sure to leave some reviews, or comments! They help alot! ;).) *Shamelessly leaves himself a 5 star review* Huhuhu!

Hello! I’ve been an avid reader of this book for a short while now. If you’re looking for a good review that will spell out the cons and pros of this novel, please keep reading. I havent gotten too far into the book, id say I’m in the middlenof it. First of all, I would like to give many thanks to the Author for the amazing story written, and I promise I dont have an agenda against you; that would be shameful of me huhuhu ;)! Pros; -Great world building. The story is set out extremely well, and it almost never gets boring. -Interesting system. It is cleanly detailed, with almost no holes through it. It’s more of a system, than a person which is a plus in mg book. -Hilarious MC with cold qualities. The MC is hilarious, and has made me laugh multiple times. ehm evolution seems painful.. hehe ;) -Multiple races. A variety in cleanly thoughtout races. Quite a large amount of them, most of which are new to be seen, created and made out. -Weak to Strong. Becomes powerful, and its cleanly designed to feel refreshing. As for harem, I don’t think so. Atleast not where I am. Cons; -A bit boring and slow in some parts. It had slow moments like all books. -MC seems to sometimes forget about becoming stronger. The MC’s main goal is strength, and yet sometimes he gets distracted from that. -Becomes more focused onto his lover, instead of himself. This is a personal opinion, I didnt like how the MC has almost forgotten his main goal. -Slight tad bit too much of romance. MC is too into his head about his lover. Everytime he looks at her he fauns over her, and slowly has become more centered around her. I dont mind this but it has become a bit too much for me. For example, most chapters consisting of her has her being teased, spanked, flirted with or just faunrd over. Anyhow this book is up to you read about. I prefer no harem. So author, please no harem! Thanks for reading, Author Greed!