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2020-06-04 Joined Canada

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I am great fan of rebirth stories but i must say that im really disappointed in this one. I really wanted to convey my truthful thoughts to the author and this is the only way i could figure out to do it. The main character, she gets a wonderful chance to redo her life but she again becomes obsessed with another guy. Yea she is doing it because she wants to repay him but she has way more important things to deal with like how her own family is trying to ruin her, her exams, how to get these bad ppl away and save her wealth. Yea the guy saved her but she knows nothing abt him, for all she knows he good have been part of the plot that ruined her in her **t life. She knows nothing. Any sane person would take step back to think and plan her steps. But here she goes like a crazy person. Acting without thinking like a brainless idiot she throws her life around. You need to love your self first so that someone else can show you real love. Also she had such a small encounter with the guy, she shouldn’t be so hung on the guy calling Mr bodyguard every few min. Its disgusting. The story started all great but seem to have lost the idea and essence I know writing is hard work and im nor trying to hurt the author. We are all paying for a book with some quality. The girl acts like she has no depth and so many chapters revolving around how hung she is and it doesn’t make sense. Since its been over so many chapters please turn the story around so all your readers feel good to read the story and feel satisfied with spending the money. Good luck and looking forward to reading a better novel

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