There's an interesting mystery here that implies a lot more to come. The characters are quite likable and I like the tone which they're speaking with. If I could give some writing advice, I'd like more descriptions of settings and characters. I'd like a stronger idea of visuals, possibly through character sensory of the environment.
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There's an interesting mystery here that implies a lot more to come. The characters are quite likable and I like the tone which they're speaking with. If I could give some writing advice, I'd like more descriptions of settings and characters. I'd like a stronger idea of visuals, possibly through character sensory of the environment.
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Fantasy · Mymylove06