Issac_Bonilla - Profile

You made me eat my words, you are improving and it shows, something to complain about would be the interactions, but they are not bad

I don't think Superman would launch the first attack, he would try to speak first, but let's keep watching.

very short, but interesting for sure

In the series, in the first episodes of season 1, they explained that Mo can see through certain material, if I remember correctly it was the zinc

Good way to introduce the mutants, the effort is noticeable, not like many others I have read and they do not focus much on character interactions or introduction

I found it short, looking forward to the next chapter, the appearance may be somewhat inconsequential, but the age difference is something that I have noticed a lot in the world of mushoku tensei, there are tall lolicons and shotacones in that world, and of course There's love and stuff, but fans tend to ignore those things easily, possibly because there's a lot of that throughout the animemanga.

I liked what you cooked here, you had it prepared several chapters ago, it was genuine quality here, you have potential as a writer

is it a translation? or are you the one who uploaded this to wattpad? I think I read this before on Wattpad and if you are the author I must say I am grateful, it is a great story

Thanks for the chapter, your work is incredible and the grammar is great, it makes me feel like I'm reading a comic and not a fanfic, please keep it up

I thought about it a lot, but what will happen to Susano?

please don't let it fall

I got a mythical item, I like it continue

Thanks for the cap, it was great

She is good too

She*sorry for the spelling, use the translator here

romance is difficult, but following L's profile I think that a person like ichinose, but I am not convinced by any of them, but definitely my best option, I think that for this L it is better a person who causes him "curiosity" a person who makes him It's intriguing, intelligent and fun (that's why I thought of ichinose, but that would be very obvious and I don't know).On the other hand, Kikyo already has an advantage and that is "curiosity", but because of how you built the character, I don't see a future together romantically with Kikyo, and I find it difficult for Kikyo to be with Eru, he is a bit unstable and to be honest, yamamura I'm not sure, as friends everything is fine, but as a couple I don't see much chemistry in them

postscript: I'm your fan, I love how the story goes

You are making a wonderful representation, but the truth is I fear that it will be complicated because ayanakoji and koenji are constructed in such a way that it is difficult for them to see that they "lose" this is a good way of course, you made a good point and you gave it an appropriate follow-up to that, but if you ever encounter a difficulty in not reducing the narrative or tension (without it seeming like a nerf) it is highly recommended to find a partner/assistant who knows about the characters and can be useful in those cases.

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