Webnovel Author: Ryughaa - Novel Collection

I read 10 chapters but it just wasn’t my taste I prefer 1st pov stories/thid person novels Like Solo leveling. Supreme magus Dimensional desent Genius archer streamer Legendary hero is a honurs student Those are the only genre I know as a example to give my taste anyway no hate to the author of the sort it just didn’t fit my taste

Honestly I read your previous works they were good but honestly it was good till yih started adding multiple pov not that it's a bad thing but it should only be done when looking into another character past such as a extremly tragic past that is good to get to know the character usually done near end of story or mid part of it But it was bad till mutiple povs But the problem with it is that it gets extremly confusing on what’s happening I’m not trying to hate since it happens to everyone at some point but my honest advice when writing is to stick to one pov and convey what happens through what the mc dose and what happens to him example When reading a Reddit story of a guy explaining his life it’s in 1 pov that’s what draws people into the story even if they are fake I feel like I was harsh but keep going I can’t hate one someone that’s trying Have a good one

Over complicates every detail of the story just stick to one pov a story about this should only be about the Mc POV This isn't even a read for me because of the over complications Just stick to one Pov idk what people told u but when you add more then 1 pov in a story it over complicates things ad makes it hard to reconize whats happening 2.8

Not worth the 20minutes I wasted reading Not bad grammar not bad idea other than the fact that 99.9% of the stuff he says isn't in the story and most of it is made up because if you go to the wiki it shows that even when a seal is undone the person with the seal can still make it so the tailed beast is unable to leave the body of the host 2 when the tailed beast leaves the body all chakra related to the beast can't be saved in the host or be connected to it the only way naruto survived this way was because Minato sealed half of the yang side of Kurama in him witch he later gave to naruto but it's still Kurama. 2.6

Not interested translation is mid Story is ass

Honest review So I’ve read till 336 I’m going to be brutally honest this novel is 4 for mean it’s not goated tier level but still pretty good a to me is solo leveling level so I belive putting this on a 4 is good So far I liked it at the started didn’t seem that bad but later on when he makes his own village we got into slow life for some reason I’m not mad about it but we went from 2 animals trying to live and survive to being surrounded in a slow life witch I kinda understand but it gets borring when it’s like 20ish chapters of it Either way I had a fun time reading on I would recommend this if u wanted to read but I just didn’t like the chapters from 300-336 so I stoped reading I read this when it first had 30 chapters I will give it a 4 because I’ve seen worst stuff then this and it’s honestly not bad thier world building lowkey carried tho

Ok

Umm this was not made with chat gpt It was made with novel ai with my thought included lol

I'll give it a 4 because it has potential

Np

Shadow Slave It's in the original category

Copy and pasted from the Og version called mercenary enrollment He just took yu ijins spot My honest opinion of this story is a2.4/5 Just not a enough depth some of the writing feels ai I would recommend to read novels that are popular and understand how they convey there emotions instead of saying with a gaze fill with worry do Example[ :title showing emotion] Her heartbeat thundered in her ears, her pulse racing like a wild river beneath her skin as she raised her hand, fingers trembling Heres what showing emotion looks like