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Master_Atlest
male LV 13Well, I am into stuff that don't have guys wimping over girls
2020-06-05 Joined United KingdomBadges 9
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wait is it me?
A/N- I always had problems writing long texts and do my best to make at least 800 word each chapter. To me that already feels rather long when I write it but recently I saw a comment from an author on another book saying he did 2000 to 3000 every chapter and I was like 'Whaaaaaaat?!'. So please tell me, are my chapter too short and do you have any other suggestions that could improve my writing or book quality?
Beyond Reality: Throne of Nothingness
Anime & Comics · LostWizard
ok and, what do you have?, at least this person writes and gets assistance, what do you have?
Geralt, who usually had an air of dexterity and coolness, seemed contemplative, almost disturbed by his encounter with Ciri, a girl who had been destined for him by the law of surprise. He had found her in the forest, a dangerous and mystical place by the force of destiny, governed by the Dryads, fierce defenders of their domains. Ciri, despite her young age, had entered the forest alone, demonstrating an unusual courage for a child, and found him.
The Witcher - Uchiha Madara!
Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague
its not MTL
"How is it possible that I am here?" he murmured to himself now, his voice almost lost in the city's hustle and bustle. "How can this world, which I only knew in stories, be real?" Each step he took seemed to confirm more and more the reality of this world, a world he only knew as fiction.
The Witcher - Uchiha Madara!
Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague
well how about you make something unique where the mc is a royal and actually stays one and enjoys being one instead of a bloody commoner, at this point its just a cliche
"We were just wondering if you've been doing okay lately. Most of your friends have gone off to the academy. You must be excited to join them," Eisha offered.
I Can Copy And Evolve Talents
Fantasy · RighteousFilth
ngl thought it said mosquitoes
During the first rift's emergence, humanity was ill-prepared, and after a fortnight, the spatial rupture birthed grotesque monstrosities that ravaged human life.
I Can Copy And Evolve Talents
Fantasy · RighteousFilth
so modern
"But dear, we've tried everywhere - the mall, rooftops, even bars! You said the same thing each time..."
I Can Copy And Evolve Talents
Fantasy · RighteousFilth
and now he can manipulators yours just fine too
[Bone Manipulation Technique]
Global Lords: Hundredfold Increments Starting With the Undead
Games · Angry Piranha
hayfever disagrees with you
The only place Nathan managed to cool down was the forest. The beautiful trees and fresh air seemed to soothe his mind.
Elemental Vampire
Action · anime_otaku_6087
sorry about that, i have fixed the error
ch 17 First mission
Young Justice: Vampire
Anime & Comics · Master_Atlest
kaldur, is trying to make friends
Kaldur's smile was understanding. "It's a wonder that inspires awe in everyone who steps aboard. Perhaps," he added, a hint of amusement in his voice, "later, when things are less hectic, I can give you a more detailed tour."
Young Justice: Vampire
Anime & Comics · Master_Atlest
fixed
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Young Justice: Vampire
Anime & Comics · Master_Atlest
yeah thank you, I appreciate the support, The timing has been a bit off at the moment, summer holiday is coming up so they are shoving as much work on us as soon as possible, Here is a peak legit for one day
(Ok, people are getting bored, and I can feel it, it's time for some action! I am changing the story, remember, this is a fanfiction so why should it follow the story? I am making things more logical and making it make sense, giving the people a boost in brain power.)
Young Justice: Vampire
Anime & Comics · Master_Atlest
thank you, its not like i wrote this in a rush to show i havent dropped the fanfic, nor the fact i did this in between exams and course work
Batman's gaze swept across the young heroes, lingering for a moment on Asher. A flicker of something unreadable passed through the Dark Knight's eyes before he moved on. With a curt nod, Batman vanished in a blinding flash of light, the Zata tube booming shut behind him.
Young Justice: Vampire
Anime & Comics · Master_Atlest
yeah sorry about that
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Young Justice: Vampire
Anime & Comics · Master_Atlest
"Pietro be careful, he is dangerous" The girl with red hair said, Pietro smiled with confidence "Wanda he may be fast but I'm Faster"
Ldksks
Movies · Karate_master_b
ooooh bohoo, no one cares what you want
Would he accept his words, The Rumors have grown to large to try and deny it now, If he accepted his words will he even be able to explain why he was such a deadbeat even though he was 'Aware' of my existence.
Ldksks
Movies · Karate_master_b
why did they make him 25 in identity then?
I am Only 15 afterall, Haven't had the chance to completely develop yet.
Ldksks
Movies · Karate_master_b
oooh i thought he was a kid
You are 25 years old, and that will be your new identity.
Ldksks
Movies · Karate_master_b
are you stupid? most villains watch their parents die infront of them, and decide the world must pay, i think its fair that they are making counter measures
"Well I mean he can still be killed right" The Lady with Red Hair spoke, "No matter what kind of attack I used His body simply turned into lightning causing him absolutely zero Damage, But in theory if we Drastically speed up Rubber using a Circular Saw Machine, We could Harm him at least, So far it seems that only the rubber has been able to restrain him" She Said as she looked down at her Bandaged Hand.
Ldksks
Movies · Karate_master_b
garou
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Beyond Reality: Throne of Nothingness
Anime & Comics · LostWizard