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That's a stupid system. You find proof for your innocence? Well, suck it. The criminal is gonna run free, sorry, time's over
While falling to what he could see was the U.S. he his mind shifted to Alexia as he hoped she found the proof that proved his innocence. As he wanted her to watch the innocent man she accused of murder turn this world into a living hell.
The God of the Undead
Games · ThatFroggyBastard
A system forgetting about your level-ups? That seems helpful. How lucky the MC is for not having a normal system .
Before he could wallow in any more self-pity, Dixie interrupted and said, "Oh, I forgot, Ding. Congratulations on reaching the max level with leftover experience now, you can use your {Evolution Manipulation} skill to choose your next evolution. Choose wisely; you won't be able to change back later."
The God of the Undead
Games · ThatFroggyBastard
Wait, he had proof of his innocence this entire time?
While falling to what he could see was the U.S. he his mind shifted to Alexia as he hoped she found the proof that proved his innocence. As he wanted her to watch the innocent man she accused of murder turn this world into a living hell.
The God of the Undead
Games · ThatFroggyBastard
Oh this amount of mistakes is nothing. It's annoying, but at least you can guess the meaning. I'm used to way worse on this website
ch 0 7 Chapter 6
Death system
Fantasy · RandomGuy
Then why do you continue living?
"Do you not fear death?"
Death system
Fantasy · RandomGuy
Something like this. A stone. What? Seriously, what?
What's Space attribute now? I can go anywhere in space with the stone. Something like this? A stone.
CHAOS DEMON EVOLUTION SYSTEM
Fantasy · Dr_Hero
As you are the author of this novel, I want to ask you something. Do you have a proofreader or editor? Because in this novel there are several major lingual problems like grammatical mistakes and wrong words being used. Don't get me wrong, your novel seems great, but these problems really turn down the quality of it.
ch 0 5 Chapter 5: Filthy Humans
CHAOS DEMON EVOLUTION SYSTEM
Fantasy · Dr_Hero
That's the problem you're pointing out. The novel has problems like this all over the place and let's be honest, that one was the smallest one.
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CHAOS DEMON EVOLUTION SYSTEM
Fantasy · Dr_Hero
Either the author or the translator seems to have problems with English wordings. Greed instead of greet, were instead of wear, etc.
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CHAOS DEMON EVOLUTION SYSTEM
Fantasy · Dr_Hero
I have the feeling something's up with the translation. Several words aren't what they are supposed to be, it says his energy is 9, yet in the next sentence it's 8. I'm gonna continue reading for the story, but I hope the translation gets better/I find a better translation online
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CHAOS DEMON EVOLUTION SYSTEM
Fantasy · Dr_Hero
Great novel, but there aren't more than 60 chapters as of now. It's been 5 months since the last release, but people should nonetheless check this one out in the hope of further releases.
What It's Like Being a Vampire
Urban · Miraculous Hamburger