Webnovel Author: MelodicSnow - Novel Collection

The grammar can make some of the subject matter a little hard to grasp at times. Despite this, the world is well described by the author’s superb vocabulary. The author is also really good at building tension.

Alr alr. I’l have to consider how the moon would affect world building. I’d always considered how the politics affected the world, but hadn’t gotten to the point of considering the moon. I’l take note of this.

Thank you for reading. This is my first web novel, so it's a little wonky in some areas. I'm confused by the question about the pen though, lol.

It's great to hear that you liked my story. Chapter 2 is coming out Friday at noon EDT. I like to do these on a weekly schedule bc school and other life stuff. It also helps me focus on quality as I usually find writing these things and coming back to them a day or so later. That's where most of my best writing comes from. If you want more of me though, you can follow my Twitter: MelodicSnow77

The author has a very satisfying way of describing small details. They do a great job at painting out the environment for the reader in not just painting a mental picture but creating a mood. The author is also great at describing how characters feel and putting you in their bodies. This also comes in handy when it comes to action scenes, the sheer violence of some of it really showing through in their descriptions. The attention to detail all works to make the protagonist feel small. The immersive descriptions of everything really just work for making this world feel real. Definitely worth the read.

Thank you so much! I'm releasing weekly just bc of general life stuff. Still, I have plans for this to be a pretty long-running series and have planned plot points for multiple arcs.