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Most of the characters are trash that make the story unreadable.

Story was good until ch 38, then it became retarded dogshit with a pathetic loser waste MC

Story is unreadable trash. The MC despite the writer having them regress acts like a naive pathetic retard. The only way to story could be saved is if the MC immediately drops dead and we get a new one that isn't a pathetic oxygen wasting loser.

Trash, title is a bullshit lie. By the time the free chapters are done, which is 53, Rin isn't demonic anything. Sure the MC isn't an undead king but I'd still fucking undead while Rin is still just a gatbage human. There slow pace and then there is retarded pace, this shit has hit retarded.

Don't waste your time, this story is unreadable garbage. To call the MC a pathetic oxygen wasting trash who can only improve the story by dying is an understatement. Really the only chance this story has to not be trash is if the MC fucks off and dies he is that pathetic and disgusting.

Story had a chance to be good but the writer got greedy and padded the word count in the extreme with the annoying ploy of wasting entire chapters telling us 1 paragraphs worth of information over and over and over.

the story is boring, slow and full of all sorts of ridiculous made up cliche nonsense, just to railroad the plot.

The MC is a pathetic loser, and the brain damaged writer can't even keep is character straight. Claims he hates betrayal more then anything, finds put he was betrayed and then just shrugs it off. The writer is an incompetent moron.

Yet another asswipe writer who claims their Story is "MCU" to trick readers in when it's clearly not. Your timeline is so beyond fucked and unrecognizable as the MCU trying to claim otherwise just makes you look stupid. Along with all the other shit you added it's 100% an AU.

This story is Garbage, writer can't even get through the first chapter without blatantly contradicting themselves. How incompetent to have to be to write something in one paragraph and immediately turn around and blatantly contradict it.