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the world building was one of the best I've ever seen, very well crafted with details, it would deserve five stars just for that, however what ends up leaving something to be desired is its protagonist. You see, I even understand that the author is trying to build the protagonist in a very real way, but in my view, a person who ran away from home and lived on the streets would have a stronger psychological resistance, the protagonist seems to be just a walking corpse with vague desires without truly tracing the path to these desires, he always ends up being very reactive, everything that happens to him is a surprise because he is always lost in thought and the fact that he never chooses what he is going to do but the choice ends up being forced to him looking like the protagonist achieves things only through his plot armor, you can see that every time he murders someone he always ends up blaming the circumstances making it seem like he has nothing to do with the deaths, he has what appears to be a sense of superiority to everyone else only because he chooses to feel remorse for the deaths he has caused when most could be stopped. THAT'S WHY DESPITE THE BEAUTIFUL WORLD CONSTRUCTION THIS ROMANCE GETS ONLY 3 STARS

And if anyone finds a place to read this story I would be very grateful

this is a great injustice a story this good shouldn't be erased brings back the story even if you don't keep posting new chapters[img=update]