Code_Muscles - Profile

The story at the beginning was great. Though near the end (and the end) it disappointed me beyond belief. The story revolves around the MC and everything is seen through his eyes. We get to know more about how the magic in the game works, and how special the MC is for learning it so fast. How players interact with NPCs and their personalities (though I would argue not enough). His relationships with girls both in-game and in reality were fleshed out (and some were neglected). The story of course has many fights where at the beginning the MC tries to fight not only with pure power but trying new spells on his opponents (though this also did not last as just strengthening the existing spells was enough for him and using simple but fast spells were the best option for him). Essentially, it had good potential for seeing perspectives from the two worlds, and their interactions because of magic. But this was wasted with the author seemingly forgetting about the plots he began, making everything just so happen to allow him to do something or get the next big upgrade he needed, not allowing his girls to have any meaningful personality beyond loving him, and ending in such of a rushed manner.

Nicely done. You summed up all of the main pain points. So, thank you :) Btw I have read also 600 or so chaps.

This story is quite interesting for those who can put up with some of its lacking aspects at the beginning. Where as some jokes were reused often and got annoying ( although it ends in the later chapters ), the later development has only gotten better with time and to me, more than made up for that fact. This story is more character driven, we see the world through her eyes and her development. Because she is OP from the get-go, it is quite hard for her to have any meaningful challenge. When she has one, it is a fight to the death where she almost always ends up in a near death state. I don't mind this, as I like her overpowered ness but that might not include everyone. Oh, and it will take her about a year to become a god in the worlds time (Not including the time she spends in the dungeons).