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Great chapter as always love your writing style can’t wait to see we’r you take the story from here

I can’t wait to see what a bahamut can do a griffon dragon hybrid is going to be so cool

Love this story and the beauty of your description of leonard’s moniker

That’s an understatement

Same just seeing the hybrids come with lith to eraticate everything in verendi

That’s how I’ve felt the entire novel

I love what you are doing with Le and Noah as someone with who is firends with someone and has trust issues when it comes to letting people in the process to noah and le getting together seem very natural and im glad that it took as long as it did from when she was introduce to now and seeing the changes of both that are pretty natural and can’t wait to see arachne and le compete for Noah

That’s not a reaction of hurt feelings but ptsd she was murdered by bytra’s orginal that’s not something that goes away quickly she still has nightmares relieving the feeling of being brutally murdered and watching the people she called here friends be brutally murdered. Do you think that being touched or carried by the person who is now inhabiting the body of that person with all of their memories would not trigger any reaction from her. I have an uncle who has some prettty serious ptsd it doesn’t take much to get him to be back in nam where he watched his fellow soilders die. So come off it saying that she just has hurt feelings she was MURDERED by her and she has those memories that’s a kinda of trauma that is debilitating.

Hence why her family never did to op for her own good, cause imagine this but with spells that inflict as much pain and healing to completely imobilize targets with some lightning and freezing attacks she would be nigh unstoppable

I read chapter like this like i read batman comics or other superheroes with crazy paranoia and preparedness. As waiting for them them to have the i fooled you or you actually entered my trap moment and that’s where the suspense comes for me from waiting for the moment jinri takes back the upper hand and has control over the situation again or shows that she has been controlling the situation the whole time

That’s Some big praise from you I can’t Wait to see what you do going on I really love this book and your writing

The reason I said chifgion it’s because of her being the daughter of a high ranking demon or was it the demon king that has a grudge with maxwell and therefore William and she will most likely either get injured or taken away by that man and force Williame hand

I feel that something will happen to chiffon that will push William to sign his soul to the goddess of darkness that has her eyes on him and unlock the prince of darkness class

Or daughter

That would be sick

I teally thought that the giant demigod chicken was going yo ruin the whole thing but im very very glad that he didnt and i might be a sadist from how much i enjoyed these chapters

I cant wait to read when the blood of these foolish hypocritical elves die and paint the earth red

Becuase i have a fever and the only perscription is elven blood

Thats why i dont mess with them

She did start as a house cat before evolveing