I'm not a huge fan of romance stories. However, this one is very interesting. There are very few to no mistakes, the plot is entertaining, and the characters are understandable. I will definitely keep reading and looking for more chapters as they come out.
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Way to go. I generally do not like romance stories of any kind. However, this one has my attention. I absolutely love it.
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I think your word processor failed you in the third line where there are two question mark diamonds. I'm enjoying the story so far, btw. Great character development, I love the banter. It's already fun and interesting!
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Teen · MistressUnderworld
Very well done! I love your writing style! The way you describe the characters and the things they go through is absolutely awesome! Keep writing!
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Fantasy · ky_rine