story is not bad, fanfic is sticking to canon but, I hoped there would be more to fights. a huge part of fight against dagon has been skipped
ch 17 Chapter 17: Let's Change Things #9
Anime & Comics · Fuck_the_harems
better be a good excuse to ditch the semi final match of all things. just because team is strong does not mean MC should skip it.
"Because I have to go to New York with Kotaro-san and the boys.....
Anime & Comics · some_writer
no
Would you guys be interested in a world-hopping type? It has been a while since I asked this.
TV · CultivatorReader
I dont have problem with MC losing. but after beating Inashiro losing to this team seems forced. Masamunes abilities as pitcher seem way too strong :/
ch 61 Seido High Vs. Komadai Fujimaki 2 {RE-EDITIED}
Anime & Comics · Hoku_1
imo you should simply add a funtion to system that will allow you to improve the current team. usually i m not a fan of OC
ch 61 Seido High Vs. Komadai Fujimaki 2 {RE-EDITIED}
Anime & Comics · Hoku_1
I agree >_<
ch 61 Seido High Vs. Komadai Fujimaki 2 {RE-EDITIED}
Anime & Comics · Hoku_1
seems very forced
ch 61 Seido High Vs. Komadai Fujimaki 2 {RE-EDITIED}
Anime & Comics · Hoku_1
I wonder what would be the reaction of people if they learn that rei started playing baseball just before he entered Seidou. I m surprised it did not come up in Magazine interview or something.
"Seido, haven't heard of it", said Masamune as he found out who their opponent was going to be for the 1st match.
Anime & Comics · Hoku_1
i dont mind bashing as long as it is reasonable
Also, I decided on the pairing, it's Severus x Bellatrix. There will be serious marauder bashing, like very serious, so if anyone likes them yet yourself out now.
Movies · BLACK_GLOOM
While story is not bad i just thought snape had other reasons to become sauron, i dont knw like his abusive father. Maybe something like father killing his mother or while the man was physically harming him/his mother & snape snapped, decided to do away with the "muggle"
ch 0 3 3. Mutatio
Movies · BLACK_GLOOM
i forgot something. WTH happened to furuya?
ch 52 Inashiro Vocational Vs. Seido High 3
Anime & Comics · Hoku_1
He keeps producing scripts too quickly :/ would seem suspicious. imo should slow down a bit.
Ryan – "It was okay. I finished writing that horror TV show I have been distracted from for a while."
TV · CultivatorReader
Ryan used to be a middle aged man. Alex is 13 years old? i get that it is one of those reincarnation type stories but i still think it is weird :/ would have been okay if she was around 17 or 18 years old :/ but of well it is a fanfic.
Alex spoke, "Okay, as things have come down to this. I will give you a response."
TV · CultivatorReader
but this is a jujutsu kaisen fanfic.....
ch 17 Chapter 17: Let's Change Things #9
Jujutsu Kaisen: Butterfly effect.
Anime & Comics · Fuck_the_harems