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I am sorry but I wouldn't recommend it..... too many mistakes. .. The FL name is Charlotte Cooper but her "nickname " is Genna Winslet which makes no sense whatsoever.... I couldn't connect with the story... one of the reasons was overusing the characters full name in almost every sentence it was very cringe especially with english names. I am pretty sure you don't adres you husband/friend by his full name... I don't know the author, maybe is a novice. I will make a small suggestion for future stories to stop overusing full names when it not needed and use pronouns instead. It cuts the flow of the story... Overall the story wasn't bad, it had some interesting points...

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Warning!!!! Lost brain cells... frustration off the roof.... anger maxed out.... Speechlessness beyond imagination....... only 60 chapters reading this ismy review. This is the worst novel I have read so far..... I don't know where to begin.... If it wasn't the constant swearing like every other sentence (bi.t..c...h.... s?..l..u...t) I wouldn't think that they were all a bunch of angry toddlers throwing tantrums not adults. The FL dumb beyond repair despite being described as genius hacker, having medical abilities, racer, writing scripts, teaching acting and who knows what else down the line .... one example in ch 40 something they were on the road on the highway they were ambushed by a bunch of people.... the ML easily get rid of them and all of sudden a "child /assassin" comes crying that she is lost pull out a gun shots the ML and takes the FL hostage. After she is rescued and the ML wants to kill the assassin lookin child she stops him because she touched her and saw her past even after she discovered that she is a notorious killer with quite the record...she still thought awww poor "child" she is soooo pitiful O_O and this is what she said :“I can cure your illness and neutralise the poison, and I can also make you a normal person. Will you be my friend?”.[img=faceslap]😶😐😑...... I can't even.....no just NOOOO. ..... dropped.... don't waste your time and brain cells.....

It had some potential but there are to many things missing. No world background ,there is a queen and a princess but no mention of the emperor(what happened to him????)there are I think 5 major families that are powerful but not properly defined and the rest of the population apparently are insignificant. The FL has no background😂 she came to life on her own as there is no mention of her parents on any being related to her..... no law, no consequences... the world is being described as the ones with power can do anything they want. So I don't understand this forced character setting of the FL being the only one with a moral code especially after she went through.... there is no organization to enforce it , to punish the bad people, to put them in jail or something..... I tried to stick to it but couldn't. To bad..

There is no romance, not even a little bit.... the ML is the biggest piece of trash I have encountered in a novel. There is no redeeming or even remotely nice quality about that guy. Frankly as the story progresses after their "breakup" and make up around 1300-1600 he became more and more disgusting. He is a psychopath, selfish and his jealousy is beyond ridiculous. He has no respect for her, and how pushy he is to have a baby regardless that she is in school and wants to wait to graduate.... I can't even begin to describe how frustrating it became... And the fact that FL magically loses all common sense, backbone and IQ when she is with him. Always has an excuse for his behaviour.... I just can't [img=faceslap] . It ruined a lot of the story.... to bad... it really had a lot of potential.

I don't recommend it. After 500 ch nothing changed. That Qu Rou is still in the picture.... the characters are stupid. Especially the FL, she is weak, naive and stupid.... the ML is an abusive toxic asshole, there is nothing redeeming, or even remotely likeable about him. Most of the male characters( the brother, that Shen guy) portrayed really bad. They are forceful, they don't respect the FL at all. I am sorry but the story is trash... this is no romance is toxic...

Bad news my friend 😂 chapter 600 still the same routine, te flirting never stops.... which is why I dropped it, too frustrating , couldn't take it anymore.

It had so much potential...... to bad😶 The FL flirty personality is to much, there is no middle ground. After 200 chapters it has become annoying. She is incapable of having normal conversations, even in serious situations. Every question she is asked she makes fun/flirts with the other person and makes them mad. And the ML is the same extreme personality, no middle ground. It always mad, and if his friends/comrades makes fun or tries to joke with him, they are punished with heavy training. It very annoying. I will continue reading it but if there is no change 100 chapters,then later I will drop it. No my cup of tea.

The ML is just....A big NO. Even with his friends is an asshole. I really don't see any likeable qualities in him.... He is selfish, rude and arrogant.....