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This is the first time I have given such a low rating on this site. Usually, when I don't like the novel, I close it and look for something else to read. But here, the problem is that the author clearly has knowledge about DC but lacks understanding of the universe itself... And above all, I was expecting to read a story about an MC who uses his intelligence to create inventions and design stylish plans, unfortunately, here the MC does not use his intelligence, the author tries to pass off his plans as "smart" but in truth the MC just creates gadgets that could simply be called from Deus Ex Machina... I was still reading to pass the time and hope that something interesting would happen... Let me explain, The MC goes from fighting second-rate Gotham villains to literally destroying the Hell and beating Lucifer Morningstar, over a story about drinking his coffee at his house... The power scale is clearly not consistent. It could have worked with other entities like the Anti Monitor, Cosmic Armor Superman and even Anti-Crisis Wonder Woman, because they draw their "powers" from the Multiverse. But we are talking here about the most powerful "character" in DC... The main character prefer avoids Barbatos/Perpetua and "flee" the Dark Multiverse. And now you're telling me he beats Lucifer Morningstar because of that?! Let me explain... Just a reminder, Lucifer and Michael are the only entities to have been directly created by the Source itself, the most direct emanation of GOD. Michael received the power of the "Demiurge", that is to say the power of infinite creation, while Lucifer was endowed with the power of the "Will". Basically, they are above other entities like the Super-Celestials (Perpetua, The Hands), who emanated from the Source but were not directly created by it. Lucifer is literally the only being with the power to disobey Source. He is truly independent, free from the Multiverse. He defies Destiny, in short, he is the only one who can say "NO" to God. He also defeated Michael, who directly received his powers from the Source. He transcends the Multiverse and its rules. He even reaches the primordial void before the birth of the Multiverse, that is, non-existence. It's not with intelligence and technology that you can hope to defeat him. Lucifer can surpass creation, he literally has no limits. He can even surpass the story that the Source had written for him, because he embodies "WILL", free will. Because he is the Bringer of Light, The Morning Star, the one who rebelled against the Presence from the creation of the universe. He is the only one who stood against GOD.”

Great! The only flaw I can point out is regarding the fight scenes. The first-person point of view spoils the suspense of the fights, and I struggle to fully immerse myself in them... Aside from that, the story itself is very well done :)

Too bad, it could have been interesting. I came here after reading the fanfiction on MHA, where the MC had an interesting power and even though they became OP, it was "justified", where they had to plan, train, etc... Here, I don't understand anything, the MC uses Bankai like consumables, the fights are mostly boring with him using clones and various swords and when the author decides to end the fight, it's over. There are also way too many unnecessary secondary characters, even though the addition of original characters could have been interesting, there are just too many. Most of them are completely uninteresting, or even useless. (Sakura? XD) Finally, on this site with an infinity of stories abandoned after 20 chapters, I give this rating to encourage the author for their quality of writing and the stability of updates. Anyway, even though I'm okay with criticizing or not liking the plot and characters of DXD, it's just a shame to write a fanfic about this novel/anime, it might have been more judicious to write another story.

Overall, it's a pretty good story that diverges from the usual Harry Potter fanfic standards. Generally, I dislike Harry Potter crossovers because it's a low level world. Here, the author creates a lot of interesting concepts and characters that fit "well" into the universe, so even if characters like Rogue or Minerva aren't too developed, it's not too bothersome. Unfortunately, the problem, from what I've read so far (Chapters 150+), is that the main villain is still Voldemort, which is a total letdown. With all these new elements added, I feel there should be a real Final Boss who brings it all together! Overall, it's an engaging read because of the new elements, but I also hope the author stops "Chinese Young Master" face slapping scenes, and the MC is also starting to get annoying because of his typical Japanese "harem"...