I really liked your novel, it would be good if you continue doing it, since it is quite entertaining, the only thing I would recommend is that it would be good if you advance it, or make a jump in time, to the naruto shippuden, since there it becomes more entertaining and it does not become tedious, also having some romance or ecchi scenes could also be, as with ino or tsunade hahaha, greetings and continue like this
Action · Lain_Walker
I liked it a lot, you are a very good writer from my point of view, and this novel is entertaining, do not abandon it........................
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I really liked your novel, it would be good if you continue doing it, since it is quite entertaining, the only thing I would recommend is that it would be good if you advance it, or make a jump in time, to the naruto shippuden, since there it becomes more entertaining and it does not become tedious, also having some romance or ecchi scenes could also be, as with ino or tsunade hahaha, greetings and continue like this
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Action · Lain_Walker