I think my English is pretty good, at least good enough to work in a an English speaking country. It is just that the way you write in English is weird. The sentences don't flow, neither does the logic etc. It is pretty hard to follow. It may just need an editor for smoother transitions.
ahaha. And your name is villain...not much of a villain!
most likely the other one I think.
Even more, if Arthur wanted to, he could simply use his teleport rune to win this. However, most of those with this ability were descendants from the notorious traitor family, so this ability was rarely seen.
Fantasy · MellowGuy
Author it is only chapter 198. You should find a way to build something here but try to incorporate a love triangle. It is Crete the most used trop on tv shows and drama but it works!! in keeping readers engaged and guessing who the lead will end up with. Like Harry Potter first girlfriend, last girlfriend, like the vampire diaries, etc. I feel like that is the next level in human relationship that most of the writers on this platform cannot master so they go the easy road and do harem instead of confronting the difficuties, confusion, doubts of love triangles. I feel like the way the lead is growing and maturing could be a good basis for that.
ch 198 Say No
Fantasy · MellowGuy
The story so far is good but the English is pretty bad. You are using "he" to design female characters wrongly. it gets very confusing. Maybe you should write in your native language and use google translate?
Cannon Fodder is a Master of Manipulation
Urban · Xernad