Badges 5
Moments 45
it is kinda a plot hole, but it was explained that system users have immense plot armor, and even in ridiculous scenarios will make it out. With this in mind, the training the MC is doing does seem kind of pointless, but maybe he thinks that it will give him more of a edge.
By the end of the third day of this training routine, Compass Carburettor smiled, "It's done. I have one Darlac now."
I Hate Systems
Fantasy · Overlord_Venus
hate for him wouldn't have been so unfounded
And the worst part was he couldn't move a single inch and was helplessly lying on some bed watching the blurry face of a young man mocking and laughing at him.
The Damned Demon
Fantasy · Resurgent
why would people continue to bully him, especially to this extent. It seems like he's in a catatonic state, not being able to move or speak. It would be like bullying a statue. I have to imagine that people would get bored of it at some point, and at least not put in as much effort as they are. Also, if the king really did care about him enough to take care of him for 14 years, I assume he would have heard of the mass harassment. It seems like everyone is literally destroying his body, and there has to be someone who would report it to the king. It feels like a super contrived way to create trauma or resentment in the mc. This is just my opinion, but it would have made more sense if he had done something to the general populace. Maybe he accidentally pressed something or tripped into a lever that released a dam, lowering the cities water supply and causing a super harsh winter. Then the peoples Vehement hate for him wouldn't be so unfounded.
And the worst part was he couldn't move a single inch and was helplessly lying on some bed watching the blurry face of a young man mocking and laughing at him.
The Damned Demon
Fantasy · Resurgent
I think u need to add "I" or "We" before Will
"Will make it up to him," Haruto said with a lit bulb against his forehead.
THE AWAKENING: BIO-GENETICS
Fantasy · Dy_zamite
nervously*
"It's alright Aiko, this is mine call I will talk to him" Haruto said nervous.
THE AWAKENING: BIO-GENETICS
Fantasy · Dy_zamite
good chapter
ch 0 6 6. Nightmare Winter | part 2
Polymorph Swarm
Fantasy · Egotistical
kinda a clunky way to tell us her powers
"Our abilities dummy. I have serpent physiology so I could do all that a snake can do as my basic ability but after my [Upgrade] I can tap into the powers of mythological serpents. Some of them can manipulate elements, so I can fake my powers as elemental manipulation, but what will you do?"
Villain's Rising
Urban · Night_Crawler619
this must be the reason, i recently killed my family over a undercooked potato.
"..." Is it because of the so-called vegetable soup? Did the members of the Going Gloomy group hate it more than him to the point that they would kill their own kind?
Undying Monarch
Urban · Romeru
good chapter, dont rip your ribcage out of your bleeding chest, that would be sad
ch 0 5 5. Nightmare Winter | part 1
Polymorph Swarm
Fantasy · Egotistical
good chapter
ch 0 4 4. Like they were never hurt
Polymorph Swarm
Fantasy · Egotistical
this wasn't the point of the comment, they were asking why something that can be produced by the thousands every day in just one area is so expensive. Assuming they aren't the only orchard that produces the apples they should be way cheaper.
"Every peasant working here will lose one months' worth of wages in compensation for the loss and for the rest of it, as the boy caused this mistake, all his property will be seized and sold off to pay for it."
Walker Of The Worlds
Eastern · Grand_Void_Daoist
why were they being so hostile if the point of the ritual was to bring them back to life. Surely they would want to keep good relationships with the survivors, and making them think they were being executed would just make the whole situation more complicated and difficult
ch 0 4 Reborn.
The Ultimate Lich
Fantasy · AxlSLL
death by gallows takes anywhere from 10-20 mins, A quick death is probably way better than slowly getting strangled to death.
"Don't stop!" yelled one of the guards, the crossbowmen reloading and aiming their charged bolts at the tied and weakened Sunians. The dead of that panicking and scrawny loyalist demonstrated to them that maybe the gallows were a better death.
The Ultimate Lich
Fantasy · AxlSLL
Do you have a release schedule, or is it random?
ch 0 3 3. Fearless Meets the Feared
Polymorph Swarm
Fantasy · Egotistical
Alot of things can be used as a weapon, the chair that he picked up earlier could bash someone head in. Maybe it has something to do with his thoughts towards the items use?
*You can not use weapons when materialized.
I, Wraith: The Slaughterer System
Fantasy · Eijirou_Daishin
this isn't really a valid argument. Even if it takes 3-7 days for someone to awaken with the large spheres, im sure ppl would take the opportunity to have extra stamina if it meant having to touch a stone for like a month. Its too big of a boon.
Ephemella then turned a page, showing a basic statistic, "For an average person to begin producing Darlac in their body, it takes around 3-7 days even with the optimal Darble sphere. And, Darble Spheres of such sizes are incredibly rare and precious. There are only three in the royal castle while the four major noble houses possess one each. So, the number of people we can awaken is limited."
I Hate Systems
Fantasy · Overlord_Venus