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Creepy_CuddleBear

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Look under your bed... I dare ya cause then you would've wasted your time cause I'm already gone... I also like books and reading :)

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Replied to Dominic_Zibuda

I aint sympathizing with you though. While I agree that the paragraph was long asf and a run on nightmare. I just didnt see the need to say “I aint reading allat” and then get defensive when someone paints you as annoying. If you know the worth of your time then why comment in such a way as if fishing for a response. If you were an author you would understand that insulting ones work, yes I said insulting not constructive nor helpful, would certainly peeve them off. Have a good day :~).

To be more specific, my family's manor located in Valden city is divided into 2 main sections. On land area will be the main giant castle-like building surrounded by walls which is the accommodation for my family, guards, and servants. In addition, the bailey was spacious enough to contain dozens of blacksmith forges owned by my father. Every time mother carried me out of the main building to observe forgers doing their work, I could always hear the ear-piercing sound of the iron hammers bonking against hot steel to shape them into weapons, they were non-stop, from the earliest time in morning to the latest hours of evening. The one in charge of everything here was father, he checked every product as clearly as possible until he decided which ones were qualified enough to be sold.

TBATE: The Emissary

TBATE: The Emissary

Anime & Comics · DaoistvZHdIQ

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Replied to DaoistvZHdIQ

I mean it would’ve been a lot more digestible if it was split into 2-3 paragraphs. But reading people say “I ain’t reading all that” does get kinda frustrating as an author.

To be more specific, my family's manor located in Valden city is divided into 2 main sections. On land area will be the main giant castle-like building surrounded by walls which is the accommodation for my family, guards, and servants. In addition, the bailey was spacious enough to contain dozens of blacksmith forges owned by my father. Every time mother carried me out of the main building to observe forgers doing their work, I could always hear the ear-piercing sound of the iron hammers bonking against hot steel to shape them into weapons, they were non-stop, from the earliest time in morning to the latest hours of evening. The one in charge of everything here was father, he checked every product as clearly as possible until he decided which ones were qualified enough to be sold.

TBATE: The Emissary

TBATE: The Emissary

Anime & Comics · DaoistvZHdIQ

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Imagine if all of Octavis’s blessed are otherworlders. Just a theory.

Mikoto just shrugged their whining off as he continued moving, not really bothered by the fan girls and fan boys. He missed the curious gaze that came from Lucinda though.

A Journey Unwanted

A Journey Unwanted

Fantasy · PocketCat2

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Replied to driveknight

But why? There is no currently any good reason, I would understand that action if it would bring him more benefit than just more problems. Killing just to kill makes no sense as he gets nothing from it except getting rid of a nussance and causing even more problems as the parents or powerhouses are away currently. If they show up they would ask where the 2nd son is and they would eventually track it back to him along with the strange powers that the mc displays any powerhouse such as the guardian of the clan can sense him leading to further suspicion. The best move would be to leave this issue alone and to prove himself to the clan/display his power with the backing of the cat guardian therefore gaining the support of a big clan and suppressing the issues of his siblings in combat overseen by everyone. Leading to an outcome without any malice or after effects from third parties as he would be supported by the main powerhouses of the clan and his sister. Therefore ensuring his steady growth and possible peaceful life.

Creepy_CuddleBear
Replied to driveknight

I think they meant that the family would kill him. A known trash that killed a valuable son, and I think they would suspect that either he bartered a deal with demons if such a thing can happen. I mean realitically and rationally how could trash suddenly gain a boost in power. But also he is not strong enough to do anything without any consequences. Well in any case a show of strength, to upturn the clan’s expectations would either have dire consequences or extreme benefits. But killing him because he can is immensely stupid as the clan guardian stated that she would kill him if he was to hurt the clan and the death of a precious genuis would stir the hornets nest. And certainly as children of the main family they would have been groomed from birth to be powerful so they may have their own backers and factions amongst eachother. But all this to say that killing him now would be a misstep but that can’t be innfered either as we don’t quite know the goal of the main character yet.

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Replied to Sleds_Writer

Np and amazing story so far, it has been keeping me engaged in the story and there isn’t mich to gripe about story wise. :~)

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Crystal Evolution

Crystal Evolution

Fantasy · Sleds_Writer

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Replied to Creepy_CuddleBear

Oh nvm I saw in the desc that the author doesn’t have english as their first language but still having their names repeated multiple times kinda messes with the flow of a paragraph unless multiple people are talking to eachother kinda thing.

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Crystal Evolution

Crystal Evolution

Fantasy · Sleds_Writer

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A lot of Kierans… not just in this paragraph but in the previous paragraphs too. I notice alot of name repetition like in a translated novel… :~) Just somethin I noticed.

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Crystal Evolution

Fantasy · Sleds_Writer

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Sci-fi · DryImagination

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:~).

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"I really did go far… But the time has come…"

Azimuth: The Elden Throne (New Version)

Azimuth: The Elden Throne (New Version)

Games · Follower_of_Abadom

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