Tyler_3485

16d

Commented

honestly love the book so far, my only complaint is that your chapters are way too short. keep up the good work though writings hard this story is quite unique, and I like that.

ch 71 Start Of The Battle

Elemental Vampire

Action · anime_otaku_6087

Tyler_3485

16d

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

ch 66 A Talk With Ken & Incoming Danger

Elemental Vampire

Action · anime_otaku_6087

Tyler_3485

21d

Posted

this is the Assassins Apprentice written by Robin Hobb but with some names changed and paragraphs added or subtracted here and there with the added cultivation theme stuff that doesn't quite fit with the typical cultivation story's because it's plagiarized from another author. but if you like this try the actual book you can buy is off amazon

Legend of The Young Master

Eastern · Nobelnerd

Tyler_3485

1yr

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

ch 619 Stomach

Demon's Virtue

Fantasy · DiceVR

Tyler_3485

1yr

Commented

its so obviously bahlsen that i hope it isnt

ch 248 Encounter with the Collector

Demon's Virtue

Fantasy · DiceVR

Tyler_3485

3yr

Commented

cant believe your actually asking for donations your writing is barely legible. do you even proof read what you write there are errors in almost every sentence your characters sound like cave men.

ch 121 To The Marshland II

Monster Integration

Fantasy · AnWan

Tyler_3485

3yr

Posted

needs hard core editing can't even start to read it got to chapter 5 the concepts seem interest but there are grammer errors in almost every sentence

Monster Integration

Fantasy · AnWan

Tyler_3485

3yr

Posted

don't know if you'll see this but i believe someone has posted this book series on amazon but called it lords of chaos by zara atkins obviously you wrote it so just a heads up and hey fantastic book you should really continue your writing its top notch

Paragon of Destruction

Fantasy · TomVanDyke

Tyler_3485

3yr

Commented

the one thing I absolutely hate about this series other than the cost for chapters ...... freakin "pro-league" uhg just tell us how many chapters we need to skip

During the mid-version phase, the new Pro League would be released. There was still some time before the opening, so players had time to upgrade, learn new skills, and change equipment. However, on the forums, the league officials had already begun the preparations, advertising widely and attracting the players' attention.