Mercilessly cruel? He literally offered chance after chance for his opponent to surrender. Then knocked him unconscious mercifully rather than torture or permanently harm him.
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Fantasy · PilgrimJagger
Authors who make their MCs extra stupid at the beginning are pretty much just telling us they intend on artificially delaying the plot. This main character is just not likeable, let alone relatable, in any world.
ch 42 This is not a normal behaviour (1)
Fantasy · PilgrimJagger
Just paste it in like everything else. you don't have to do it every time, but I'm now feeling like I'm missing part of your story. If you don't want to do that then paste it in as a comment.
(A.N: Look at the status screen page in the auxiliary volume, press CTRL+F, and input CHAPTER 26 to see the status screen.)
Fantasy · PilgrimJagger
and yet he spends half the chapter complaining.
ch 0 4 Realization
Fantasy · Magecrafter
And there it is. The moment the author lost most of his readers and tanked his own novel. You can't make a book about saving the world with the biggest idiot ever for a MC. Well.. I'm sure some writers can. just not you .
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Games · TrueDawn
This is one of those chapters where it's clear to see the bots and fanboys thanking for what is a horrible chapter.
ch 37 Legendary VR Helmet.
Games · Alekzi
Right? It's literally more a part of the plot than the white online system itself is. I think the author has some trans fantasy he is trying to live out through a fake. character
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Games · Alekzi
Do we know most of these things already? sure. Can we assume the rest? Absolutely But having it shoved down our throats every chapter is just poor writing.
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Games · Alekzi
Yeah I'm done here. idiotic plot and dumber author.
[You have been banned from every Merchant Store in Stronglord!]
Games · Alekzi
He's all of a sudden brilliant?
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Games · Alekzi
the author is either 12 years old, a virgin, or an extreme narcissist. maybe all 3 lol.
Currently, at the school, they were still kowtowing to the picture of Isaac.
Games · Alekzi
phrasing!
Eat his meat, drink his blood, and devour his soul…
Eastern · 7 Years 7 Days
such a spoiled, whiny, MC
Adrian was shocked because the old imp did not even looked at him. The old imp even turned him away without batting an eye. Adrian was flabbergasted by the rudeness of this NPC. It seems the programmers have vented their frustration using this NPC. This NPC must have been the incarnation of the programmer's evil thoughts upon making this Paradox Plane. Usually NPC's are supposed to have neutral stances unless you are of course from different empires. Adrian did not mind the old imp's behavior and continued with his request since he was warned that the person in question was eccentric.
Games · XiaoKongxu
and the author tanks his novel again because all he can do is copy cliche from other bad novels lol
" What kind of trial is this, if you don't want to give your inheritance to anyone then why did you create this inheritance ground for???", Ajax yelled at the voice but didn't get any reply in response.
Fantasy · vinayraj
It's almost like they made an AI read a ton of webnovels and this is what it spit out when asked to write one of it's own .
" Since we can't do anything to him, we can do whatever we want with them in the inheritance ground, right? ", Nedhor's gaze is filled with killing intent but not as powerful as Edmond's though.
Fantasy · vinayraj
A weak author is determined on this site by their need to boost word count with no actual enhancement to the story .
(Author's note:- Experience is changed into the essence of nature. Killing beasts gives the essence of nature instead of experience) .
Fantasy · vinayraj
The writing is not bad for how absolutely horrible the plot and charatcters are.
ch 0 4 Worth
The Rise Of A Porter
Fantasy · AkshatArpit