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lots of stuff seemed to happened in that missing chapter or 2.

still a repeat chapter. that's like the 5th in this series.

2nd time. for a repeated chapter.

hi, enjoying the story, thanks for writing it. quick note for you. your quote of all bite and no bark is backwards. should be all bark and no bite.

I like it.

2 weeks without an update. is this story over?

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

yeah. just working way too much. but I have a vacation coming up. so will get a week to relax

Haven't been able to comment lately, but I wait daily to get my little bit more of your story. keep it up😁. His hair was a wild orange, but Arthur (*).. need a word there. "noted or noticed?

I've tried to join the discord. but the link that I found doesn't work.

See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

"lacked answer" should be "lacked an answer"

I am liking the way this story is progressing. also you have "dock" when it needs to be "duck"

hey, I like your story. why not help where I can. it's not much and I am no expert. but I will try to help.

"apprentices that Arthur "*" the other day. " missing a word there.

"he would use them as they use* him." .needs to be used* still reading and trying to help.

ok, will be sure to let you know when I notice any.

See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire

not sure if you want the feedback, but I noticed a couple of mistakes. you have "blonde hair made into a pun*" should be bun*. and "what can I see*" should be say*

nice start to your novel.