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mc first recruit?

he's make huge progress to make villain be un defeatable first step is not wait to kill a target as gives time to protagonist and fate to act to stop you if he doesn't do monologues would be second step as again monologues give his enemies time to stop him, these are two of main weaknesses of villains they both give heros time

four infant souls? should we call him cardinal? each soul representing a direction, four soul yin yang?

maybe it is one of the people gave advice for possible or it's the princess that was hinted at from a other federation?

accidentally looked at next chapters to come, is all spark related d to Gundam title of a chapter? a Gundam transformer? I'm thinking something similar to when humans make their own transformers from movies, the one that turns into cubes between transformations

minus civil wars of our world

mecha is practical, maybe short comings of mecha can be subverted with star vibranium and it's variants, but a tank could do same work, thought if mecha don't go bigger then say hulkbuster armor from marvel I think it's reasonable. reason it's not practical is more moving parts more can break down though can be salved with fantasy metals, still if lag of mech is destroyed it will fall assuming it's humanoid, plus ground pressure is problem bigger mecha gets, if mecha spreads out it's weight maybe do able for super large mecha, like spider style mecha that can spread weight out might work, but again who knows with world of this story anythings possible

hulks?

this looks like time for their continent the zombies continent

their not counting one with card world, the number three is what is after, it's not saying total give star missions, but what new mission happened that is three

Godzilla that be cool if got Godzilla like dinosaurs

hope he's doesn't get joker gas

I can't remember isn't blot from marvel able to talk to his wife telepathically or was just being around him enough she knows him better then he does.

lol true, sorry mind works around concept and design stuff once got thought of a tower which got me thinking of star forge and then just spilled out of control, I tend get impulsive around concept and design as well right it as I think it. and true probably is air zone laws and what not then again it might be possible, plus if made for emergency events only a the building to be able fly might save them remember when super dreadnaught class broke out of planet causing everything in it's path to collapse, what if similar events happens after all coruscant super structure is actually failing but that was in clone wars era then again could be mixing up with something else but I believe it was coruscant cannon, we're base of planet bottom floor is basically rotten away. I thought if worked similar to a luckerhulks design with a core command center aka the tower, and ring that attaches to the tower. would give it vertically, maybe not as extreme as originally texted, again was in concept impulsive state at time probably still am. love concept and design it's what my mind works around. and I literally have condition that I'm conscious all time even in sleep I'm alert and aware, yes I get a lot of migraines, I find thinking of concept and design helps you exhaust my mind enough to get sleep, currently going through medical check ups to hope find probably but have other health problems before they start why my mind doesn't stop. I dealt with it sense was young. what ever you write or don't I don't mind I love concepts and idea making, and seeing people write there ideas out coming from my thoughts or not it gives inspiration which I love, and if don't like my thoughts see it as way to find what you don't want maybe help narrow down what you want. and have memory issues so I may forget, so remind me if I get heated again in concept idea suggestions, I'll try dile it back. and thank you for story can't wait for more, what ever it may or may not be. maybe force be with you

don't forget defenses of headquarters and other, maybe make the building capable of emergency take off with hyper drive capabilities, this only ment be used once it's deemed to dangerous for headquarters to stay put, also if they want relocate headquarters they would be able too. think of command center from StarCraft but gigantic building, second to add more capabilities to the headquarters is taking inspiration from both star forge and luckerhulk ships, my thoughts the HQ will be a super structure both command center as we'll droid manufacturing on board I suggest a hk 47 like model but more friendly but still same personality type, other is a droidika and droidika big brother though can't remember name of it. maybe even customized by mc to be better like beskar playing a kyber crystal power generator and even upgrade shield to be able to be active while they are rolling around, with six legs instead of three for better mobility and legs have extendable legs so more mobility and in speed of walking, with repeater blaster gun(mini guns) to increase fire power, then add hk 47 personality. also add small to medium ship build facility, next is the HQ can connect to a super structure in space that works similar to luckerhulks but on bigger scale,but unlike luckerhulks this ships rings are complete circle's and totally rings are minimum of 3 to total of 9. and each ring is made to be completely modular. size of outer 9th ring is big enough to have facility's to build a star destroyer of clone wars era though but slower as ring is still smaller then star destroyers makers planet ring.

thank you

just occurred to me what happened to hk 47 hope he's not left be hind, I miss fleshing hating grumpy droid sadge

mc did think robotics hand would be cool

I think I said this but I love these droids

even though he would probably kill me he's one of my favorites