There exist an identical story like this on fanfiction.net called 'The Age of Men' by cloud9stories. I don't know if you are the same author or you are blatantly copying, so I can't accuse or anything similar.
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The soul was dumbfounded by the brilliance of God, his mind had shut down for while in the bask of God's brilliance, after a few moments, his mind restarted as soon as his mind started to work the first thing he said " I am sorry for calling you coward. I am blessed for having even your glimpse, oh Almighty may I ask you why I am given this glorious opportunity to be in the presence of yourself".
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A thin black choker wrapped around her slender throat. A comfortable-looking black Muggle tee shirt draped her torso, complete with a cute skull over her heart. It was short-sleeved, revealing tattoos on her arms that I was sure weren't normally there beneath her robes. A black, pleated skirt covered her lower half, but only just. And what it didn't cover was crisscrossed enticingly by sheer fishnet stockings.
The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) [Complete]
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