Webnovel Author: ScribblingLance

3mth

Replied to Thunder_XTEH

I just finished going through and editing all of the chapters and breaking up the paragraphs more where I can. Thanks again for the feedback!

The Broken Gold Prophecy

Fantasy · ScribblingLance

ScribblingLance

3mth

Replied to ToufiqUlAlam

School settings are definitely one of my favorite arcs. Tons of good material there.

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The Broken Gold Prophecy

Fantasy · ScribblingLance

ScribblingLance

3mth

Replied to ToufiqUlAlam

That's totally fair! King Magnus and King Edgar were the ones saying that they had some time because the darkness hadn't been seen in their kingdom as far as they knew. King Theos disagreed saying that they should still hurry even if there isn't an immediate need for a hero.

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The Broken Gold Prophecy

Fantasy · ScribblingLance

ScribblingLance

3mth

Replied to ToufiqUlAlam

It really helps that I read a lot and watch a lot of anime/other shows. I like to be able to imagine the scene in my head and then describe it.

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The Broken Gold Prophecy

Fantasy · ScribblingLance

ScribblingLance

3mth

Replied to ToufiqUlAlam

Thank you so much for the kind words! I definitely have a lot of ideas, and I can't wait to put them all down!

The Broken Gold Prophecy

Fantasy · ScribblingLance

ScribblingLance

3mth

Posted

It's pretty interesting so far. I enjoy the world building along with the great detail and description in all the scenes. The intro of the little girl was interesting too and sets up a lot of intrigue.

Strange Tales of a Little Mystic

Fantasy · Mashuk_Musafir23

ScribblingLance

3mth

Replied to Thunder_XTEH

Thanks for the feedback! I'll see where I can break up the paragraphs more.

The Broken Gold Prophecy

Fantasy · ScribblingLance

ScribblingLance

4mth

Posted

The masterfully crafted world enthralls readers with its captivating blend of fantasy and reality. Anna's journey through virtual heroism and real-life challenges strikes a compelling balance, navigating the complexities of online connection and everyday pressures with emotional depth. A must-read for anyone seeking a VR story.