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Despite reading only a few chaps... 2? And only reading a few comments here, i stil got to agree with the reviewer. Changing an established character because of preferences is a no go. Unless there is a reason. (souls merged and somehow eye colour changed because the eyes are the window to the soul. Would explain the changes in a bare minimum way)But you can't simply change it in a fanfic since the characters are already established or atleast existing ones. Same with the name, could have said a new person needs a new name but can't make it too obvious. So tom short for thomas after the merge. Tho it would be fun to see the author start describing dumbledore as gandalf because gandalf cooler. Or make Harry look like urkel. (Fun but again, shouldn't be done. Any changes due different circumstances is normal tho. So if the story deviates from the original then the characters change)

Sorry this won't be a proper review. Best novel of the newer ones posted so far. Obviously there is a cheat but it's not really a system. Good to read, good grammar, decent characters, no detailed background as of yet... or much explanation on how they get the monsters as of yet.

5* Translation: No problems noticed. 5* Updates: 60 chapters in a row! ( I know trial read, unless picked no more chaps) So just 5 stars for that 4* Story: It feels rather rushed to me on how fast the develop. I think not even 2 weeks has passed and the mc and others are already rather strong to some extend. They got promoted and strong way to quick for only 2 weeks passed. 3* char: Your typical average Chinese MC. Quick to anger and ''ruthless'' to some extend but nice towards allies. Oportunistic and incredibly lucky. Also much wow and who that from random lord 474 of xxx country. 3* Background: The world is 10x as big as earth! Too bad you only know a little about the surrounding area of a village. The world is huge and a lot of different countries but you don't hear much of it. Unless it's some powerful lord of a country that takes interest in the rise of the MC. (Even then not much explained) 4* Score: So yeah summed up a 4 star. I've enjoyed it so far but if it turns into something like world online or lord (something with that ring) then i'll stop reading. The novels are somewhat similar but this one has shown less favorism so far. Story is somewhat fast paced and the fight scenes are MEH. Stil an enjoyable read for those who like army building or city building. Just don't expect the novel to go too in depth or focus on it. (Atleast i doubt they wil from what i've read)

Just to be clear about the POV switches, i do not mind it if it doesn't end on a cliff. So personally i prefer if there is a cliff on a lead then keep the next chap about that lead untill a part is cleared. (lets say ML is in a fight for a chap and some big attack is thrown and chap ends. Then don't go to the FL the next chap.) Of course this is simply my opinion and i do not have patience.

Not enough reviews for a rating... so i'll rate. Writing quality: No mistakes seen so far. The use of ancient chinese in the story throws me off at times simply because i forget and too lazy to check the aux chap. (Author has explained the meanings in a chap) Updates: The updates are stable. It's just not updated enough if you ask me. I want more but i don't want the quality to drop because of it. So i'll be content. Story: There is a lot of development and early on it might have been a bit annoying. (Cliffhanger on ML and the next week the chap is about FL so 2 weeks before we get back to ML) I hope that at the latest chap (of the time of this review) There wil not be too many shifts again. Char: They are well enough designed and interesting. Background: Everything is good.

Wanted to look for newer-ish reviews and found out 90% of them are 5 star ctrl-v messages. (copy paste 5 star) So i'll drop it where i left... forgot where. (100+ something) Anyway can't leave a non-review so i'll try to remember and write one. Writing: If my memory serves me right then the writing quality is good, no mistakes or maybe minor... or none. Updates: no idea... is ok? Story: It's a fun story... get's a bit... repetitive in some area's but which novel doesn't. (Please if there is any do tell) Character: Ehhh they seem fun? Background: Yes

No problem and i see it's somewhat interesting if you think about it like that. You see or feel trough the MC. Anyway keep on the good work, i'll be reading.

A 4.4 because i felt like it. Writing: There aren't many grammar mistakes if any at all. But if we are talking about the story writing then i wish things could have been shown more instead of telling. At the moment i don't feel connected to the characters or the place as the writing style makes it hard for me to immerge in it. (This might just be me) Development: It's going at a nice pace so far and it's developing in a nice direction. Not much to say or add. Character design: Some parts feels off or forced. As his first friend in the academy... They met for one day and he would die for his new friend? It sometimes feel characters have no depth to them. World background: Honestly... I wish it was shown or told more of what there is. Like a description of the academy or kingdom. The world background feels rushed over. (Not the continents or larger places but more or less the places he visits. I don't really got any idea of what his surroundings look like most of the time.)

“This is the system? This is my trump card? Why did you only give it to me after I died?” Lu Qing crossed over to the cultivation world and spent 200 years to become a Golden Core cultivator. He married, had children, and created a clan. He only activated the “Clan Development System” after he died from serious injuries. [Spiritual Root Enhancement], [Resource Scouting], [Pure-yang Body]... Which option do you want?

A reply to myself but... i think the cover picture is wrong and might not have helped for this novel to get picked. The cover photo is of a rather bad other novel about beast taming.

Honestly... of the trial picks, this one is probably the best. Not sure why that Everyone is a returnee clone got picked. Well probably because it's a clone. This novel got an interesting story, world and characters. The translation is good and well... no updates.... Overall just a good and interesting novel that should have been picked.

A good novel for those who like wish fulfillment novels. Writing is alright, character is... barely passable. (he has mood swings or is bipolar or something not sure but the mc is not consistant and it's not because of development) Story is fun, altho i thought 3rd world just dragged on. world: concept of the background etc is obviously from another novel but its a interesting concept

First a question before the review. There are some old reviews even tho the chapters are new... maybe you deleted the chapters to remake the novel, that i don't know. But i read he joined the straw hats in a review and so, does he join the straw hats in the 'remake'? Story wise: Interesting that he started as a slave and the system is... well a system. Writing: Some mistakes here and there but nothing unreadable. Story: Not enough out there to really say anything. Char design: Same as story World background: Should be good as in OP has a good background. Dont know if it wil be shown in this novel tho... atleast not yet. (not enough chaps)

Writing quality: Gave it a 5 star since i couldn't find anything that bothered me. Updates: Nothing too much to note, stable i suppose? Development: I'm not sure, the MC his goal seems to live a happy life with loved ones but the further i read the less that seemed to be the case. At some point i dind't even know what his goals were anymore except becoming strong. Character: Lowest of the scores i gave. He's like the mc of ATG... i think it was that? Guy who murders entire kingdoms for looking at him wrong. The mc of this story seems to going the same path even tho he's supposedly to be ''good'' (read the story and you know that he's supposedly the good one and not the bad one) Either way, i don't see him as good and neither does he. Maybe the bad would just be massacring for the heck of it? Anyway i see him as neutral but... neutral exists. Background: Pretty solid overall Conclusion: Read it, it's a good novel. Just not for me or some other people tired of the neutral evil mc. Of course all this might change in the future chapters or the world is that vile that he seems like a good guy but i'm not interested to find out anymore.

Writing: Nothing too much to notice, some minor mistakes here and there and annoying patreon advertisement at the start of a chapter. Updates: Can't say i looked into it or seen how often it updates but something is better then nothing so a pass? Story development: It's a very fast paces story with an OP MC in the making. Already has an OP servant that is probably the strongest in the world after... less then 10 chapters. (Would have personally liked a slower pace but that's impossible now) Character: Honestly this bothers me the most. Everyony seems to accept his mature mind in his 5/6 years old body. Wants to go to a war for expierence? Sure you're 5, go ahead. Sit in an important strategy meeting? Sure you're 5, you might bring valuable idea's. (You get where this is going right? Nobody questions anything and everything is accepted as is because GENIUS. BTW he is now a duke ruling over his own land as 6 years old....) World background: Not much to say about this, it's not bad.

Just giving it a 4. For might be readers: Concept is good, writing is good, background is good? Character design: Going to be a hit or a miss in this story. Either you like the comedy in it or not. If in the first 10 chapters you hate the comedy or do not enjoy the comedy... it's better to quit early. The comedy stays, so in turn if you like it then keep reading.