Colin_Holman - Profile

it's pretty good so far😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

you can almost see the writer getting better and better the only problem I have with it is that he seems to want to change the characters abilities from when he first started

I enjoy this story very much and have interest in concepts characters good put into situations that are difficult for them but not impossible

this is a weird but interesting story I hope it continues I put the writing quality at four stars because the story is stuck only in first person and the story development down because little seem to happen in the story after 26 chapters

I like the story I like the characters I wish there was more unlocked content or more stories like it 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁