Webnovel Author: The_Ram_TS - Novel Collection

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This novel is boring as sh#t. Bored bored Bored bored Bored bored Bored bored Bored bored Bored bored Bored bored Bored bored Bored bored Bored bored Bored bored Bored bored Bored bored.

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It's a slow story. It has a good description of the setting, I think its problem is the description of some things as characters, it rambles a lot in that sense. There is also the fact that many Chapters do not have exciting scenes, which makes it tedious to read.

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The story has potential, but it is being totally wasted. Things like: forcing the mc not to go to Orario until he is 16. Why? Or the confusing wordings. Just turn off the desire to read

A "review" for the review. Fantastic.

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The story is not there, to a certain extent it is entertaining. The problem is that at some point too many characters were added and the protagonist was somewhat forgotten. Like a filler, but it's not anime.

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It's okay, it's entertaining, good development. The only apparent problem is the forced drama and power level, otherwise everything is fine.

It's that type of fanfic that is well written, but boring as hell. The author tries to be original, but forgot to do something entertaining. The first chapter is the greatest example.