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indeed
"…as for planting, I can use it to a temperature-controlled farm that won't be affected by pests, fluctuating weather conditions, or any external problems, just like the one in Stardew Valley!"
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Overlord's last sentence
Suddenly, a knot formed at the bottom of Daniel's throat. He looked at the champions reaction to the Overlord's la sentence, and immediately realized that the hostility the various domains felt towards one another had completely disappeared. A wall made of differently colored bricks had now formed a united front against a greater enemy.
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Fantasy · SometimesITalk
Yeah, what is with all the overkill?
Daniel did not stop, and continued striking the same spot from which shreds of brain matter and blood soaked scales started to fly as a result of the constant pounding. When he finally stopped, little of the lizard's head was left intact, and its body had stopped moving.
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Fantasy · SometimesITalk
The writer has made this exact error many times throughout the book.
"WHAT?! You want to start a fire with this heath?" Asked Lilith with shock.
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Fantasy · SometimesITalk
They knew he could be a champion, at least because he can more than hold his own in a fight, and they didn't let the Ancestor know; they unintentionally denied their champion was indeed a champion. In societies like this, they did a very bad thing.
Just as the Patriarch had imagined, this piece of information struck a chord in the Ancestor, who raised his hand and used it to cover his face, now twisted in anger. After a few moments spent twitching and trembling, he muttered, "a month.. You had him for a whole month." Before the Patriarch could ask what he meant, the ancestor uncovered his face, and repeated with an increasing degree of rage, "You had him for a whole month.. AND NOW YOU REPORT THIS TO ME!?"
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Fantasy · SometimesITalk
It would be positive because of killing people who have negative karma.
Instead of the three options that his system would usually give him, there were only two. The first option was the most radical option he could have ever thought of, and it said that if Daniel wanted to free himself from the dangers of carrying this mark, he would need to exterminate every blood cultivator in existence, whose numbers reached the billions.
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Fantasy · SometimesITalk
tread, not thread.
"This can't be allowed to continue." Said one of the members of the government, who knew exactly how dangerous to their civilization, this discovery could be. Ideally, they would have used this method of cultivation to improve the power of the government, and gain an advantage against the invading civilization, but since there was no way for them to obtain it, only one path was left for them to thread. Destruction.
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Fantasy · SometimesITalk
The writer has made this mistake before. There seems to be no improvement in grammar or spelling.
Known for not being a man of few words, this man shocked everyone as he pointed his sharp eyes at the Speaker, and said with a deep voice, "Father sent me. Kill whoever is possessing brother."
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Fantasy · SometimesITalk
Apparently, it is an Archimedean solid, one of thirteen convex isogonal nonprismatic solids constructed of two or more types of regular polygon faces. It has 20 regular triangular faces, 30 square faces, 12 regular pentagonal faces, 60 vertices, and 120 edges. I Googled it; it looks very complex.
Many of these mental warriors had been called by their friends and relatives in order to observe the odd changes in the girl's avatar, and the only thing that was stopping them from kidnapping the girl to study her, was the odd presence of Aeron, whom in a world of simple triangles and squares, he appeared like a rhombicosidodecahedron.
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Fantasy · SometimesITalk
Like the occasions where they use which instead of who/whom when referring to a person. These have been pointed out and people have offered free help, to no avail.
These words were relied with enough power to break apart the body of a low ranking cultivator, and delivered with the commanding effects of the man's general gift.
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Fantasy · SometimesITalk
I don't think he entirely understood that at the time.
Before being separated from Jerigh, the group had learned from him that Daniel's family had not been kicked out by Sewah just like they had been, but that they were sent away by a recovered Daniel for reasons which he had refused to explain, as well as convinced them that it was much safer for them to stay as far away from him as possible.
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Fantasy · SometimesITalk
The writer makes mistakes like this throughout the book.
The love for one's child was not different between humans and cultivators. However, just like a worker who could not afford to abandon their place of work without taking a step back in their career, these cultivators were forced to ignore their children for the sake of their cultivation, and hope that their morale would lead them to the right path even without their parental support.
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Fantasy · SometimesITalk
They are commenting on the writer's use of the word 'which' instead of 'who' which has been very a very annoying error the writer has repeatedly made the exact same way throughout the whole book.
"I am exactly where I intended to be." Said Daniel while showing a bright and polite smile to this old man, which was clearly confused by it. He then turned to look at an individual within the army of the One With Nature, which nodded at him before taking a bite of the oddly colored and plumb fruit he was holding in his hand, causing it to release a large number of small beads of juice that floated in space.
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Fantasy · SometimesITalk
Sounds like the start of a bad joke.
They Walk Into a Bar..
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Fantasy · SometimesITalk
She was probably in such a deep state of shock that she couldn't speak.
His friends immediately dashed by his side in worry, and Alesia immediately put one of her palms on his forehead to check his temperature. He was burning, but unfortunately, they could do nothing to help.
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Fantasy · SometimesITalk
People do stupid things when they are in love.
Daniel did not want to tell her that the poison was still within his body, but he also did not want to lie to her. So, he told her a half truth.
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Fantasy · SometimesITalk
He had taken too long to die.
"The heart of a one hundred years old queen dryad?.. Where the hell am I supposed to get that?" Muttered Daniel with a hint of annoyance.
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Fantasy · SometimesITalk
It definitely seems like English is not the author's first language. There are numerous errors like this throughout the story.
After another half hour, the army of warrior started their assault.
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Fantasy · SometimesITalk
or just "I can show them right away"
"Why didn't you say so earlier?!" asked Daniel animatedly. If what they wanted him to do was just that, he would have done it sooner. "Call your father and the head hunter.. I can how them right away.."
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Fantasy · SometimesITalk
It must be 50 because the first explosion that he showed the lions was 2 meters. Then the one at the kobold camp was 10 meters. Hope that helps.
A mushroom cloud with a diameter of more than five meters formed in the sky!
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Sci-fi · Catty Catty Catty