The story is really ii good, but I dont see a lot of character development of both the main and side characters. And that’s kind of a waste of potential. This is just my opinion, and the kinds of novels I usually like to read, so it’s up to you, ig. Perhaps, if you want to go in this direction, giving different characters’ pov and having some fluffs would help.
ch 61 The Eighth Floor [Pt 2]
Fantasy · Magecrafter
No,? I think the story is flowing nicely. And the world structure is solid good. You did a great job 👍🏻
Some of you might be upset that we took a break from the action, but we're gonna get to that soon.
Fantasy · Magecrafter
Yes, it’s good to see inspirational mc’s. I learned a lot
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Fantasy · Magecrafter
That’s a huge buff tho, (in gaming terms)
Just a 25 percent increase.
Fantasy · Magecrafter
Really like their relationship rn
ch 38 Library Buddies
Fantasy · Magecrafter
Your novel is really good! I like reading it. It’s now my daily novel which I read often. Thanks for writing !
ch 30 Progressive Growth
Fantasy · Magecrafter
In*
When he looked at glass water, instead of water there would be blood on it.
Fantasy · Mohitkumar
This is a really good read! I can feel the realisticness of the characters. Thank you for the chapter!
ch 0 2 Chapter 2:Nightmare[2]
Fantasy · Mohitkumar
So confusing read
ch 12 Someone will die
Fantasy · Amera_Mee
He’s practically overpowered already TT
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Fantasy · Amera_Mee
The lower your potential is*
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Fantasy · Amera_Mee
XD
Please don't cancel me, Twitter I mean X.
Fantasy · Anit666
Samur professional advertiser eckart
Want me to pick them up from school and take care of them till you're back? Done.
Fantasy · Anit666
XD true
I may have agreed to be an elder brother but no way in hell am I acting that part. Imagine spending quality time with your family. Cringe.
Fantasy · Anit666
Yup, that one
It was tough being an exploitative ruler.
Fantasy · Chestnutriceeee
Isnt the name versailles?
After a few months, the Treaty of Vienna on 12th of January of 1814 is signed with major changes in boundaries of Europe. The primary terms agreed, as such were:
History · WewWar25
Bruh the nation is desperate and struggling , but that’s all you care abt? Haven’t you had enough money already?
'Brutus and Lucielle are going down there? They'll ruin everything!' His thoughts echoed in despair.
An Extra’s POV
Fantasy · Magecrafter