This was exactly what I was refering to... the big moment! This is just starting to get hot and juicy even before we get to the undressed parts! Love it!
ch 0 2 Chapter 2 : Alerting the Captain
Urban · Amelie Bergen
Was going to say it was a bit slow but everything in the chapter was important. Is like the author is feeding us with info and preparing us for what is about to happen... and the chapter ends exactly in that "now it happens" moment.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1 : First Day Disaster
Urban · Amelie Bergen
I really like how Raven is not a wooshy female lead, she is strong, even in front of a strong male lead, and that is admirable. I like her a lot.
ch 0 3 Chapter 3 : No Room for Error
Empire of Dominance
Urban · Amelie Bergen