Badges 3
Moments 437
As for me more or less normal, but still I think that too strong boost in strength occurred for a small timeskip.
Is this too much? I don't think it is with Shadow Clones and Talents!
Naruto: Different Perks
Anime & Comics · Kaoski
This chapter just killed everything that was written in the early chapters of the story, from Issei's changed character, to his relationship with the group..... I don't see the point in reading any further.
ch 21 Chapter 21 : Battle
DxD: Issei The Abomination
Anime & Comics · Franklin237
Yeah, Issei's character and behavior is reverting to the original. The last 2 chapters are a complete disappointment, where is the coldness that was demonstrated in the beginning chapters.... Where's it gone?
ch 17 Chapter 17 : Bishop
DxD: Issei The Abomination
Anime & Comics · Franklin237
Pfft, who's the other damage. Since the anime and manga itself blackfracture says that Minato sacrificed for the future of the village. Because he's the Hokage. Pahaha don't whitewash Minato, although yes as a father he's a moron, but as a ruler he's a hero.
"I'm not a three-year-old child, I know that enduring pain that ordinary people can't bear, the person who gave birth to me is my mother."
Naruto, Be My Son
Anime & Comics · Ginormous_Madman
Well noooo, not Karin as a romantic interest.....
He didn't see his brother and was quick to detect his chakra before walking towards him in a certain direction, he saw his brother standing while in front of him a girl with blue hair was looking at him blushing .
Naruto (part 1) : The Second son
Anime & Comics · The3Entities
Yeah, well, this story's turning into a rotten harem. Author put the harem tag so people like me don't waste their time, even those who don't like harems will settle for two girls max, but you're starting to go into the usual pokemon collecting. It's a total setup.
Would it be considered Crime if Tsunade and Naruto end up sleeping together?
Naruto with Curse Techniques
Anime & Comics · Asura_7uh
Let me guess you read that in some fanfic?) But the funny thing is, in the original story, she achieved the title on her own. Stop pulling fan-made theories that the original author of Naruto didn't confirm.
"I'm familiar with the renowned Jonin of the great Konoha, documented in the Bingo Books I carry. I'm certain I've never encountered you before," he added, his tone laced with mockery, implying that she wasn't deemed strong or significant enough to be mentioned in the Bingo Books, while also subtly deriding Konoha's reputation.
The Great Swordsman Of The Shinobi World
Anime & Comics · Malphegor
Yeah, I mean, the Hokage and Danzo are just shown to be stupid and blind, the fact that he defeated Jounin... That was completely ignored by all the superiors.... The world seems dead at the moment. There is no interaction between the characters. Strange that the Chinese author misses it, usually they have a lot of intrigue and interaction between characters, and here just zero.
ch 18 Two Months Later
The Great Swordsman Of The Shinobi World
Anime & Comics · Malphegor
Well, there goes the eye color uncertainty again.....
Feeling the weight of the bell in his hand, Hayashi finally removed the cloth covering his eyes. With eyes as yellow as Kurenai's were red, he offered a candid response.
The Great Swordsman Of The Shinobi World
Anime & Comics · Malphegor
Not only is there no interaction between the characters at all in this story at this point, but just the same thing in every chapter repeating his actions and thoughts. It's a monumental set of powers and all the other adult characters are made retards in this story. It's a pity for the time spent. I will not put a grade, as it is just a personal opinion.
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The Great Swordsman Of The Shinobi World
Anime & Comics · Malphegor
Zule Xiss, as a harem member, needs someone who can be aggressive and rebellious.
(AN: Next Chapter will be the first battle that Jaden is a part of, I wonder how it'll go. Probably pretty well since he's the MC. Anyway suggestions of the harem is always appreciated though you can't change my mind about Aubrie and Ahsoka. I hope you liked my chapter.)
Mistaken Identity || Star Wars Fic
TV · TheManUnderTheBed
Honestly, the first thing that srazhu lowered for me the impressions of this story, this time skip in 5 years, as the author just crossed out the interactions between the characters at least it could be 2 chapters to stretch to the exam... The second one is very bland narration... In short, not so good.
ch 0 3 Graduation Exam
Naruto: Sakura’s Twin Brother
Anime & Comics · DrWright
Karin, Tenten, Ino sucks.
ch 0 3 Graduation Exam
Naruto: Sakura’s Twin Brother
Anime & Comics · DrWright
I, for example, envision Serena as Jennyfer from the witcher game and Igret as Tris)
ch 70 Chapter 70 - Smut.
Game of Thrones: The Legend of Jon Arctic – ASOIAF/GOT GOT
Book&Literature · RaccoonLeague
Jon knew that with these equipment, he could produce the most feared and fast soldiers in the world, if he could create an army with these armors and weapons because everyone would be agile and never tire more than the opponent. He knew that such an army would have an advantage even against numerical disadvantages.
Game of Thrones: The Legend of Jon Arctic – ASOIAF/GOT GOT
Book&Literature · RaccoonLeague
Well, the story is normal, but the absence of conversations, actions and thoughts of other characters has a negative effect. Because it does not allow you to immerse yourself in history, but leaves you feeling as if you are reading an essay "how I spent the summer".
ch 15 Talks of Magic
Azeroth's Inferno(Warcraft/ Might and Magic)
Video Games · QuincyEcht
Good story (so far), but we all realize what it can turn into by the middle of the story (there are plenty of such stories on this site)... Yes, another problem is present in this author, the complete absence of at least one completed story. In short, read at your own risk.
Naruto: Different Perks
Anime & Comics · Kaoski