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Take some time off if you need. Family comes first.

This already deviated from the other version so there isn’t much to spoiler

Let him cook

I’m kind of waiting for a sick MC moment. Hope he gets some kind of power-up with a touch of insanity 🫡

Thanks for the chapter and congratulations on the contract

Very nice development. Good chapter 👍

I think the details you put in right now are perfectly fine. It makes the story feel more alive. If there is one thing, then I would suggest to shorten the description of fights against monsters or opponents that do not have a big impact or return in the story. If it’s a recurring antagonist of importance then it’s okay but for simple Gate hunting chapters it draws them out too long. Instead, you could redirect that space to elaborate on other characters, thoughts of the MC, descriptions of surroundings and what is happening around it. This makes the chapters much more engaging and interesting. For example, focus on the human experiments in this dungeon and maybe add some failed experiments he has to mercy kill to put them out of their misery. Maybe he can save some of them. You can also include like things he does afterward to try to deal with the psychological stress like visiting the few saved human experiments in the hospital. This can add to his future character development. Otherwise, it’s great. The MC seems rather normal and humane in this story compared to other novels of this kind where the author tries to make them unnecessarily special or unique but ends up making it annoying and cringe. Great job. Keep up the good work 👍

It’s great. Keep it up. The quality has vastly improved compared to before. Although I didn’t mind it, this really puts a smile to my face. Great job and keep it up. This is one of the few stories on webnovel i genuinely keep up with. Thanks author 👍

I Like how this is going. Very similar to the first version but the details, better grammar, and slightly different plot elements make this story more complete and way better. Great chapter 👍

Yeah, this was pretty cool. Awesome chapter 👍

Nice chapter 👍

I’ m very interested to see how this is going to develop. It feels way more detailed and more in depth than the previous version. Great chapter and story. 👍

In the current arc, two years have passed since his adoption so 12 years old.

I’m glad you like it.