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Still, big brother Bin is still better than Bin Ge, in my opinion...
"Too late... Bin Ge!!" Ling who was already in his arms said while giggling.
Winter Rain
LGBT+ · MayDreamer
Hmm... I totally did not see that. Hahaha
"Too late... Bin Ge!!" Ling who was already in his arms said while giggling.
Winter Rain
LGBT+ · MayDreamer
Very cringy, if you ask me.
"Too late... Bin Ge!!" Ling who was already in his arms said while giggling.
Winter Rain
LGBT+ · MayDreamer
So 哥, or Ge, actually means 'brother' in chinese. The worst part is, 哥, or Gē, had a second pronunciation. Other characters that sounds like this is either 歌 (song), 胳 (armpit), or 戈 (surname), where none of it sounds like a name. So as a person who knew chinese, it sounds like it's always saying 'brother'.
"Too late... Bin Ge!!" Ling who was already in his arms said while giggling.
Winter Rain
LGBT+ · MayDreamer
Erm, it's not actually about 'Bin' but it's the 'Ge' actually. If you want to write chinese names, better research what that actually means first.
"Too late... Bin Ge!!" Ling who was already in his arms said while giggling.
Winter Rain
LGBT+ · MayDreamer
What are you trying to bring out here?
"Xian, take some rest." Ling said as he saw him moving towards his room.
Winter Rain
LGBT+ · MayDreamer
And here's Ling again?
"Xian, take some rest." Ling said as he saw him moving towards his room.
Winter Rain
LGBT+ · MayDreamer
Ok, here's Ling.
"It's done!" Ling said as he sat on the couch with a cat on his lap.
Winter Rain
LGBT+ · MayDreamer
I don't get what is 'his head low'. And is he feeling exhausted?
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A Holy War: [The war between mortals and gods!]
Fantasy · La_wyrd
On Chapter 2, suddenly, a person called Leon showed up. Who is Leon? That guy from Resident Evil 4? How does he looks like?
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A Holy War: [The war between mortals and gods!]
Fantasy · La_wyrd
I don't get what is almost touching the skies. What are you intending to tell here? Just how tall is the mountain? Did it touched the clouds already? What is the structure of the building? Castle? Skyscraper? Mansion? Tower? Is the building tall? Or was it just built on a mountain? Rephrase this.
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A Holy War: [The war between mortals and gods!]
Fantasy · La_wyrd
In one paragraph.
ch 12 Chapter-12
The Fantastic Five.
Teen · Prajnya Shriyan
as someone barehanded.
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Exceeding expectations
Fantasy · ShadowNovaS
Rewrite this.
"...I don't know what people do in such a situation…but anyway let's start with the introduction. Hello, I am Xiao He‐Ling, turning 18 this year, and you?" Ling said as he forwarded his hand boy looked at Ling's eyes for some time before forwarding his hand but stopped midway, horror took over his pale face.
Winter Rain
LGBT+ · MayDreamer
Bin Ge? As in? 斌哥？
"Too late... Bin Ge!!" Ling who was already in his arms said while giggling.
Winter Rain
LGBT+ · MayDreamer
The bus conductor yelled at the boy who dozed off.
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Winter Rain
LGBT+ · MayDreamer
Yes, it's me.
ch 0 3 Chapter 1.2
The Impossible Fate That Leads To A God Of A New World
Eastern · LuciferVermillion