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Urban · A Fox's Red Dress
Watch your back girl, you’re next.😆
The girl walked away from there as if she hadn't spent her time with him, while Roman made his way towards the railings to look down. He watched the girl who had interrupted him a while ago, walking to the librarian's desk and then leaving the building.
Fantasy · ash_knight17
Oh, you trusting little girl, you think this even after reading all those rules, and having had all those negative experiences.
"Thank you," said Julie, taking the card from the counter. Turning around, she left the office room. Looked like her uncle would have to wait. Surely if he called himself, the staff in the office would reply that she was doing fine, thought Julie to herself.
Fantasy · ash_knight17
🤣🤣🤣
The tall man stood under the Civil Affairs Bureau's sign with his back against the sunlight with his clean and beautiful hanging by his sides. The sun cast a shadow on his sharp features and highlighted his icy and noble temperament.
Urban · Jie Ru
She really is too clueless for a psychologist. I am having a hard time believing it anymore. She is getting dumber as the story goes on which is really disappointing. 🙄
Chu Wuyou blinked back at Ye Lanchen. "It's not about what I want but we've already agreed on this. It's stated clearly on the agreement. Oh, right, it's mentioned even obviously on that agreement you made me established in a muddled state when you kissed me after drinking. It says that we can divorce immediately as soon as you acquire Ye Company stock ownership. Besides, you also emphasized that I can look for Secretary Liu to sort out the divorce procedures if that happens when you're away from Jin City, or at an inconvenient time."
Urban · A Fox's Red Dress
🤣🤣🤣
She feared his Third Elder Brother the most. Therefore, he could make some adjustments on the DNA test reports later to convince her that his Third Elder Brother was the children's father…
Urban · A Fox's Red Dress
Poor Chu Wuyou.
Third Young Master Ye's eyes twinkled with brilliance as a smile washed over his face. He came up with a brilliant idea all of a sudden.
Urban · A Fox's Red Dress
Petty indeed! This man is seriously not marriage material. She needs someone better than him.
She knew that he was infuriated again. Sigh. Such a petty man!
Urban · A Fox's Red Dress
I have been thinking this for some time now. He is supposed to be an elite businessman, but he doesn’t even know how to act properly under pressure.
Where had this man's usual intelligence and wisdom gone? Could he not tell that Leng Rong said that just to provoke him? Did he leave the house today without bringing his brain along?!!!
Urban · A Fox's Red Dress
This man is supposed to be an elite business man, but he can’t even control himself. There is a time and a place for everything and this is neither the time nor the place for this behavior. This man is subpar and should not be considered so highly.
His kisses were furious and fiery. He even reached underneath her shirt to squeeze her full breasts. His actions were so forceful that it hurt the woman.
Urban · A Fox's Red Dress
I’m dying laughing 🤣
This was too f*cking exciting to watch!
Urban · A Fox's Red Dress
Lol I’m dying🤣🤣 Souns like she’s saying that he’s small down there . 🤣🤣🤣
In her daze, Qin Shuang felt as though she had seen something, but she did not seem to have seen anything. In the next moment, she was picked up by Cen Bai.
Urban · Mr. Yan
A perfect example of why spell check doesn’t work. Should be panting not painting.
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Urban · Nona_ge
You mean like you ?
Else, bad people might come inside.
Urban · Norah_Koch
Sorry, but you really need an English speaking editor; the errors are so many. Great storyline though. I am really enjoying it!💕
"You lying fucker!" She puts her hands on her waist. "For the last eight years, I have been planning how I to kill you."
Urban · Norah_Koch
Should be “On the screen” not “In.”
I tap on the link that my aunt has sent me. It is a video. In the screen, I see the same reporter who visited me yesterday.
Urban · Norah_Koch
Again only correcting because you asked for it. The plural for gossip is gossip unless you mean more than one type of gossiping. Gossips would be used to show a singular trait of someone “She gossips too much,” or “They are a bunch of gossips .” You can also use “gossiping” as a way to show many people doing it if you aren’t comfortable using just gossip to show the plural sense of the word. “The gossiping didn’t stop.” 💕
As a child, going to elementary school wasn't easy. Nobody liked to talk to me. The gossips didn't stop. My father wouldn't look at me. He even doubted I was his biological child. My grandparents had a hard time because nobody would let them forget. Then, my father suddenly married my mother's best friend and left the country.
Urban · Norah_Koch
I am only commenting because you asked for help with grammatical errors. In the first sentace the word “it” should be added after the word “against” in order to show she put her back against the door. I am liking it so far and looking forward to the character development. [img=recommend]
I close the door and lean my back against and drop to the floor. I wrap my arms around my knees. This is shit. She's already dead, but people won't leave me alone.
Urban · Norah_Koch
Story ends abruptly with no conclusion. I was generous with the 3.3 rating. This seemed like a stolen story that was made into comic format, perhaps that is why it just ends abruptly, cause they were caught. If that’s the case this story should be removed from this site.
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