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There was a thick what?
'I'd rather take a cold water bath than raise suspicions here...', he thought as he took off his clothes and picked up some of the empty tin cans that were placed on the closed toilet seat. There was a thick that was on top of the opposite walls of the cubicles.
Astral Merchant
Fantasy · PsionicMind
Neither do I. All she does is hide so she isn't getting injured and her relative (Mike) is alive so why is she crying?
Lily let him go while tears streamed down her face, and he couldn't understand the reason behind her emotional outburst.
Astral Merchant
Fantasy · PsionicMind
Notify him about what? Why is he freaking out about his mana not improving? So far nobody introduced has mana yet so I don't understand the freak out here.
"Fuck!", he said, "You should've notified me before I tried to buy it for god's sake! Mana won't increase my ass."
Astral Merchant
Fantasy · PsionicMind
No problem at all, I hope me doing this helps you in some small way.
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Damn, I Awakened With A Horror System!
Fantasy · Master_OfDao
I wonder how roasted phoenix would taste? Michael was just disrespected by some bird so when he gets strong enough I hope he shows the bird its place.
[Well. That was a grand entrance. At least, it left. But does that mean the Sacred Beast acknowledges you as Paradise Valley's Lord and rightful owner as well?]
Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!
Fantasy · HideousGrain
More round, not rounder.
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Damn, I Awakened With A Horror System!
Fantasy · Master_OfDao
In front of him, not in his front.
Leo again descended toward the forsaken pit, taking the rotting materials within his inventory one by one before placing them on the wooden table in his front.
Damn, I Awakened With A Horror System!
Fantasy · Master_OfDao
Traversing not transversing.
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Fantasy · Master_OfDao
Unfolds or shows a look of disdain before, not unfolds a destain on its face before. Destain would be to perform acts that try to get stains out of clothing.
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Fantasy · Master_OfDao
Why fault a child acting like a child? So acting like a stalker is acting like a child? I bet you also say things like "they were asking for it because of how they dressed" or "they didn't say no loud enough so I didn't know to stop". If an adult was doing these things there would be a restraining order already in place. Just because she is a kid (by our society's standards) does not give her or any kid an excuse to do these things.
"Can you dance with me? Matthew."
A Necromancer Who Just Wants to Plant Trees
Games · The Key In 10 Years
Midst, no mids.
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Damn, I Awakened With A Horror System!
Fantasy · Master_OfDao
Assess, not access.
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Fantasy · Master_OfDao
Just teasing him? It is literally stealing from him. This is so frustrating to me that I want to commit various war crimes against humanity.
Helplessly staring above the ceiling, feeling that life was extremely hard. Leo decided to forget the things that just occurred. Although it made him panic earlier, he knew that the system was just teasing him!
Damn, I Awakened With A Horror System!
Fantasy · Master_OfDao
You should have used the word lest instead of least in this case. It makes wayyyy more sense that way because it sounds broken and disjointed when using least.
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Fantasy · Master_OfDao
Your grammar in this chapter was so bad it almost gave me a seizure and it was borderline unreadable.
ch 212 Cultivating, Using All of His Enlightenment Stone! (2)
Damn, I Awakened With A Horror System!
Fantasy · Master_OfDao
Why I'm now level 59, not why I'm not level 59.
'Given Tina has forced me to fight the last two monsters barehanded, which was the reason why I'm not Level 59 and the reason my CQC Skill Leveled up, if we end up finding other monsters, she'll definitely 100% force me to face it again, throwing this privilege to waste as I would use my last "Guaranteed Gear Drop" on a random monster that appeared.'
Azimuth: The Elden Throne (New Version)
Games · Follower_of_Abadom
How was the old ruler able to move so smoothly, not how was the old ruler moved so smoothly.
They are unusually heavy, to the point it's questionable if they were truly made of stone, how was the old Ruler moved so smoothly with them despite their horrifying weight?
Azimuth: The Elden Throne (New Version)
Games · Follower_of_Abadom
To have been in, not to have in.
It's certainly strange for them to have in the possession of a nameless forest Monkey, but in a sense, such a fate can be said to be poetic.
Azimuth: The Elden Throne (New Version)
Games · Follower_of_Abadom
Wrathful, not warthful.
Gives the Temporary Skills: Monkey Dance 3-Star, Grand Leap 3.5-Star, Hold Enemy 4-Star, Monkey's Warthful Crush 4-Star, Weight of the Mountain's Ruler 4.5-Star, Tree Dance 5-Star, Steal 5.5-Star, Tomfoolery of the Gray Monkey 6-Star,
Azimuth: The Elden Throne (New Version)
Games · Follower_of_Abadom
6 inches is just average though.
Once it was halfway in, he began moving his hips, moving deeper and deeper with each thrust. A minute or two later, he leaned forward and held her arm before going back to his original position. He pulled her towards him as he thrust forward, penetrating to the maximum distance possible with his above average 6-inch spear.
Astral Merchant
Fantasy · PsionicMind