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Limitless would have been better

Relised I said I wasn’t gonna argue it did, started uncontrollably rambling

Honestly I’m not gonna rogue with you because for these worlds there are more than a thousand ways to find out the mc identity. There was and never has been a designated time for when these worlds technology turn advanced. The mc is lives in smallville, the place he literally flies from multiple times to do his missions, this world is super dumbed down because by now regardless of his speed he would have been found out by now. Like we literally have a being with them stone around their neck who will immediately find you if you mess up the timeline too much. and your telling me that because of the mcs speed and the worlds tech level no ones found him? Shield literally gets money poured in from the US government and you’re telling me no one’s found him yet. Do you know how easy it would have been by now to see that whenever Defiant fly off his flights alway start around the same area. Just admit this a dumbed down world, and when a actual serious comic reader tells you the same and embarrasses you, you’ll see that this wasn’t a winnable argument

Fair point. But this a mix up of multiple Comic worlds, which somewhat invalidates your point as these 2 worlds have shown far advanced tech before anything “super” appeared in their world. Also I’ve finished reading this, and seeing your mc fly out of the earths atmosphere and back just proves to me that all the satellites in the earths orbit have been dumbed down for convinence. If you just made the world less advanced just say it don’t make excuses. But none the less good work with this novel.

That wasn’t what bothered me, what bothered me was the cursing place in the message.

Also found flying around blindly like this in worlds like dc and marvel, do to there advance tech it’s likely they have air space monitoring satellites that would find you in seconds

Recommendation here, while heart emojis are okay any other one ruins immersion. Unless your mc is in a modern world texting any other emoji type is real unsuspected.

Where do you live? In America your age doesn’t matter everyone pays taxes even babies

Either their very close or this is a normal mother and son relationship for you

Satellites that monitor air space are about to ruin his day

White shirt would have gone better with brown. Complete lack of fashion sense from the mc

I don’t think any of them will level up any time soon as the mc only started leveling up after eating a blood crystal

Least realistic thing right here the government would rather wait 3 months into the pandemic before announcing any state of emergency

Fly

Kryptonian I s the best option just fall out of the atmosphere every fight and fight in space while getting constantly powered up. It’s also unlikely any of your opponents have kryptonite.

Legit the same thing at this point youre just trying to increase word count

One thing I’ve realized in a lot of modern films is that pretty females lead are either played by ugly or average women. While male leads are either handsome or average, rarely ugly